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Your writing is exceptional good and well groomed. I like your story and the way your background is set. Good work on the book and i hope it goes far.

Your writing is exceptional well groomed.

At first i thought you los me but it slowly got more interesting. Necromacy is a hard topic to cover if you don't have the knowledge about it. You book is a definite recommend.[img=recommend]

First of all this book is interesting. I like it very much. The strong female lead is one of the things that attracted me to the book. Your grammar is also good

The story is intriguing and you are quite the master of word play. I appreciate how you have quite the depth of description and understanding of the world you created.

They let weaklings use them - not used. Change that please.

There are no creatures more wicked than humans. Truly we are a havoc to deal with.

A wise decision to side track the idea. Clever creature they are.

Although most authors and educationally advanced ones ,might understand the paragraph, other who don't have this qualifications can not understand it. A book should be in an intermediate level to allow readers to follow through.

Well hell, you now have my attention.

Thank you for pointing that out.

First of all it is lovely to see this book and the cover art. Secondly the book has a lot of truth in it which makes it nice to read. Your grammar isn't off, only your punctuation and that can be improved easily. Kudos.

The na reminds me of the nollywood movies i watched as a child

First of all the emperor is officially on my 'Character i would very much like to die' list. Secondly I like how the queen cares about her people. Last i like your story and i see that it can go far. Everyone has their starting point and yours is awesome. Keep up the good work.

The book isn't far in but i find it interesting. It leaves me with some unanswered question at some times. But so far so good. Your grammar isn't very off so thats a positive.

Where did they come from and what where the guards doing.

The setting is the firs thing that caught my attention. The characters are very essential for the plot to continue and that is good. The story might seem like a cliche but it has it's own elements.

For someone in the same field of writing i like how you stepped back and wrote such a story. It is a good plot with a good background. And that is impressing. I can not talk much about the grammar but just check on your dialogues. Kudos.

It is nice to see that people are willing to let the 'evil one' be the protagonist. A refreshing site to behold. The only thing you need to do is sharpen you'r writing skills and learn more about description. I really like the book.