Song_Shinyi
This is really a great work! I don't read romance novels so much but I'm liking this because of its short stories. I would suggest you if you could please create a short story with fantasy element? Hero fighting to protect or capture the princess or something or princess trying to find a prince through a league of wars? Action scenes along with spicy scenes would be really great!
It is a good book comprising of different stories! Good description and short to the point. So far I have completed the third story and I must say... it was worth my time! There are some errors, just if you go through all the chapters once again, you can edit them. (wink) Another suggestion from me - please add some action romance story, too! I really need those. :) :) :) Good luck!
Honestly. I'm not a fan of sweet stories, I don't like arranged marriages etc. So I'll try to be objective, I won't judge the content, just the structure etc. After reading a few chapters, I can confidently say that you know how to write. There is verything that should be in place! Just pay more attention to punctuation marks, spaces, etc. I wish you a perpetual inspiration and o lot of great ideas! :)
A good read for those who are into light harlequin romance. There are a lot interesting stories on the book which are good for you who aren't interested in long story. Each of the stories have their own unique characters and different plot which I found this is interesting concept. Overall, it's pretty good read so please give a try! Good luck to you.
Hi author~~ Upon reading your first chapter I was delved into your novel but there are some errors I have encountered, I also commented on some parts of which I think something must be changed so feel free to improve your writing, Im just trying to help Anyway, the story is really nice although there was not much of a hook in your story, but it gradually piques your interest as you read some more. That is all~~~