Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
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Kalau clan Uchiha tetap terbantai dan ayah dan ibu izuna tewas saya mungkin bakal kasih ulasan bintang satu terus-menerus ke cerita ini. Izuna juga ngapain pergi dari desa? Izuna kan tau kalau situasi desa lagi tegang dan dia masih pergi dari desa untuk menghilangkan kebosanan nya, dan juga kenapa pasangan izuna Tsunade bukan nya Yugao yang seangkatan dengan izuna dari pada Tsunade yang modal nya Oppai doang. Penulis kamu menyebalkan đĄ karena memilih Tsunade dari pada Yugao. _________ NOTE: baca ini dengan Google Translate.
And that's what we call a desperately forced plot. -- A lot of people will be dropping it after this. Not for the fact that Uchiha clan is going to get massacred, but for the fact that the plot here is too forced. It doesn't make sense at all. Author shouldn't have involved Akatsuki. And Izuna should've been more cautious. Even if he has killed Danzo, Izuna is from 21st century. He should've been familiar with the concept of timeline correcting itself. So by not being in the village, he's taking a chance on the lives of his family members. I mean who would go out of the house on the day you know for sure that you family might get slaughtered, and you have the power to change that. Even if there's a tiny bit chance, wouldn't you stay behind just to make sure.!?
For a few chapters I've been wondering why the MC is training outside of the village at such a crucial time. Im sorry author but this force fix is fine if you bring in a new group to do the dark part, but having the mc lower his intelligence by ignoring the other factors at play in the original timeline on the clan massacre. It makes less sense that he leaves his home without being a little paranoid, on how the world will retaliate on his intervention. Danzo was a danger, but he was not the only part pushing for that night. The MC own fricking grand daddy, was also a plotter in the dark. Let not forget that Toby in also another piece hidden in the dark. So like many readers, we find this part incredibly force behaviour for the mc to go out and train during this sensitive time. Well I will still stick around, but you better have a damn good reason as to why the MC is acting really stupid right now. Any who keep it up, but I think that it safe to say many are not happy with this odd turn of events. If you want to do it this way, find a way to justify it or else the great story you have written, will sadly unravel with this moment.
Bruh what the **** is the MC doing, I feel like this is getting forced. I feel like a lot of people will drop because of this bs. The MC should know that the Akatsuki wants the Uchiha dead, so why the **** didnt he take any precautions? It just feels forced af, which I usually dont care about, but this is anither level kindof forced
