Doors are for the weak. I use the mighty window.

a good funny rant

I feel bad for Jaimes...his name is John, right?

Nah, the pic is more of a rapier-class sword than a gladius.

Love this story, welcome back, thank you for posting.

I'm curious, will you be expanding once you have caught up to the original work? Or will you continue the story, perhaps you will only share the updated chapters? Whatever it is you will be doing. I thank you for bringing this story to my attention. So thank you and have a nice day.

Good story with evil MC, also can be found on the fanfiction site with the same title and pen name as the Ideas-Guy. Have fun reading.

Attention everyone! If your looking for this story go on sufficient velocity, the person posting all these books was mistaken in the site of origin. Toward the person posting this novel thanks you very much for your time and patience in placing these lovely little story under my radar Ive already found a few fun stories to read on my down time thanks to your posting. Well have a nice day everyone!

okay, your story premise is interesting. You really need a better way in screening your chapter. The mistake with all the, he and she add nothing but confusion in the story. I suggest getting an app or programme that will deal with this, or at the very least help with your grammar. thanks for the story, keep it up.

this is interesting, but what is the title, how about the author? how are we to read the next chapter if this info is missing? So could you please post the info, thank you have a nice day.

Personally, I like the fact that the MC has trouble with communicating with his sword. I leave room for growth for the character, I'm really enjoying your story keep it up. Thanks for posting.

Limps? did you mean limbs or arms?

ignore the haters, I like your story it's a refreshing read not having a mary sue as the mc. thanks for posting keep it up. I do wonder who will be the future love interest for the mc.

wait? Is the mc male or female I'm so confused.

wait? what? why isn't he in a foster home or at an orphanage? If he is left alone, then in which country is that allowed? Since most countries wouldn't leave a child of 12 alone in a house or even an apartment by themselves. I just know this is going to bug me the whole time.

That suck, hope your mom gets better. I for one finally got my first shot, now I just need to get my second in a few weeks time. I hope you and your whole family get through this pandemic safe and healthy. Thanks for the chapter, keep it up.

This new reveal for the mc will no doubt change his point of view of what he knew. I wonder if his mother was pressured away or into that familly. From my memory she didn't seem to hate the mc father, so I'm very curious in seeing where the author will take this no doubt sad part of his parents past. On the other hand I wonder if the mc ever consider taking yang chakra from naruto. I mean the boy has it in abundance, or perhaps he has dismiss this possibility in view of the high risk in potential danger, such action could bring down on the child he has safe guard all these years. Thanks for the chapter, keep it up.

Its good to read a new chapter, hopefully we won't have to wait months for the next one. Thanks for the chapter keep it up.

So close to the end! All well, if a hiatus is what you need then you do you. As for the next projects RWBY that's my vote.

Ha! Well said.