Liviing
The beginning is a bit boring but I hope the author improves as the story goes on. There should be ground-breaking actions seeing that it's someone from another world with advanced magic knowledge and with a system cheat, but it's just a boring guy blindly following the system with no initiative. A weak to strong story with no one to prove anything to, then what's the use? I really hope the author improves because the story still has potential...
Well, good story we got here, this is somehow read a bit like those system novels that are quite famous, but the thing here is that insted of being granted powers of "god" or whatnot, the MC is granted the power of a necromancer, which I think is a pretty good idea and makes this story something new, a plus is also the characters that are well written. As for the grammar, is in my opinion, pretty good, no mistakes whatsoever while reading it! All in all, a pretty good read and worth picking up just for the necromancing idea alone!
Mizar know his father's killer! Must be hard for him to know about it. He got reincarnated and got a system. Interesting so far! I would like to see how the Author can bring this exciting novel to the next level. I find the novel interesting and entertaining. Keep up the good work, Author! Well done!
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