devilDestroyer22
First time writing a book, looking forward to see how it develops 👍
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Then you can't just edit the chapters and publish it without the author's permission. It must require the approval from the person who made the fanfic. Moreover, it must be mentioned within your description that this work isn't yours and that you're purely publishing it for editorial purposes. Otherwise, you're editing is well done.
Wait I'm confused how's kurama still stronger than naruto even after the end of the 4th Shinobi war? True kurama is strong but not to the point where naruto can never defeat especially if naruto is the next sage of six paths according to this ff. Well then again if that's how the author is willing to depict then I have no qualms about it. It would be best to specify how kurama is stronger. Thanks.
He was cursed by Parasuram that whenever he needs his knowledge the most, he shall forget it all. He was also cursed that his chariot will give up on him and stuff. Instead of the mahabharatha it was interesting to see it being called from the nasuverse haha
The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book author 👍