skyerivers
I'm giving this a 5! Besides some technical stuff like long dense paragraph and a little bit of over-detailing in information, the plot is great! Fantasy is always a nice genre to read. The way author wrote his story feels like what a hardcover book would offer so, if you enjoy a slow-paced and vivid description, this is definitely for you! Honestly, the introduction is intriguing. It makes me curious on what happened during those time skip (9 months) n then they suddenly wake up capable of doing these incredible things. So, I rlly hope the author would break down the paragraph to ease the readers' reading :) All in all, great work, Author! I hope the best for you XD
A story with great potential! This is by far on par with hardcover published books around the store! The narrations are detailed and I am amazed by them! My only advice is to cut the long paragraphs with an "enter" to ease the load of our reading and for a lighter feel in the eyes. Well, good luck in the future and I hope you reach a million views in the future! Nice!
it's a slow burner. if you're looking for long and well-described story then this is for you. However, some descriptions did feel too tried, so maybe the author would fix them soon. The writing quality was decent and it gets the job done. Overall I'd recommend this to readers who like to take it easy and enjoy a book for a long time
The synopsis alone was well-crafted by the author! I really love how the story would go by reading the first few chapters of the novel. All the connection that th novel would establish would make the readers feel ecstatic once we finished reading the book. I will definitely keep this book in my library! Kudos for the author!
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The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
Writing this review after reading the first ten chapters. What I loved about the story so far: • A truly fantastic and unique plot • Palpable emotions of the characters • Likeable characters, the depiction of all the characters are vivid enough to make them feel extremely realistic to the readers • Good choice of words, that makes the writing kind of poetic • Intricate world background...I'd love to know more about this new world The only thing that I thought could make the story better, was if the longer paragraphs (some of them really long) would be split up into shorter ones! It's just my thought that most of the Webnovel readers tend to read novels as light-reads for enjoyment, so they would probably prefer shorter paragraphs that would make the text seem less tedious. Over all, the Author has done an extremely good job in narrating the story so far! Keep up with the good work, Mr. Author![img=recommend]