Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in The Answer.

A story with great potential! This is by far on par with hardcover published books around the store! The narrations are detailed and I am amazed by them! My only advice is to cut the long paragraphs with an "enter" to ease the load of our reading and for a lighter feel in the eyes. Well, good luck in the future and I hope you reach a million views in the future! Nice!