gmy
I don't know how to make this review decent, but I see most authors do this as well. I'll be giving myself a lie of 5 stars while below this are what seems to be my honest view of my novel. Writing Quality. English is not my native language but I think the writing quality is on average. Stability of Updates. I am updating the novel thrice a week, fulfilling the seven chapters I wanted to publish weekly. Additionally, my plan is to do a mass release every Monday. Story Development. I'll be skipping these parts hence the readers should be the ones to make a comment to this. Character Design & World Background. I am trying to be more descriptive when it comes to these two while I am writing the novel. The world background of the novel was all made up, I am still researching the things to enhance the world that I made here.
I dropped it early on (about 20 chapters in). ML's personality is so blank that I don't really connect with him, and typical Imperial palace-esque shenanigans are happening without much build-up (understandable, but frustratingly lacking any oomph). Basically a little bland. None of the characters have any dimension.
Fascinating. This is the first Rule 63 story that I'd ever encountered on this site so pardon me for my lack of story critique. Grammar-wise, there's nothing too egregious beyond some lacking commas or incorrect uses of punctuation. Easy fix. Dialogue-wise, it fits the time period it's in, fairly formal and stiff. Prose also flows naturally, complimenting the dialogue.. Good read. Keep on writing👍