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Everything about this story is great so far (as of chapter 30). There is excellent world building, a cool headed MC who doesnβt do anything stupid or annoying, and characters that have actual depth to them. I am extremely happy to have stumpled upon this work and made a review for it even though I almost never do. I cannot explain enough how much think you should read this.
This story is absolutely amazing! A ravishing gem amongst others. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored. Story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. Author's english is superb and this gives a smooth and enjoyable experience when reading. Also, the author's skill at giving descriptions is excellent. Greatly interested to see where the story goes. Definitely a must read! π― What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. π βοΈ
Thank you author for this story. Indeed nicely laid out from the start. I could imagine the pitiful start of Razakβs origin when he was brought in and out of orphanage and how he landed up with his previous drunken foster father which abused him. The character moulding is good in terms of how he has grown up and how his attitude is towards others and his perception about how unfortunate he is and that it is his fate. I still canβt make out if thereβs a twist on how he is capitalising on his new found ability of being a gem ie carrying the most rarest yet precious magician DNA I call it post test results. And looking forward to see the twisting fate of his on the deal he made on getting through with his deal partner on positions in politics with magic. His academy days I can imagine it would be an interesting chapter with Yasumi - princess of Ito clan introduced into the plot. All in all well written. I can clearly visualise how the coin flipping and the setup in the plenary session where the program will start off. Good job looking forward to the plot as you move the readers along it. Thumbs up and great effort. Well done author!
So I only started reading this story few days ago. (that being only 4-5days ago) .And let's just say I'm addicted to this now. That itself is a fit because I'm hard to please person when it comes to stories to read. The plot is developing well, it gives out just right amount of mysteries and gets the reader interested then hooks us into itself. Sure there are lots of words overused, fight scenes could also use some work but it's better than most. Especially the rush of new books that are coming in. The author is stable in his updates , characters excellent, they have personality. For anyone only starting to read this story. The read will be totally worth it. Highest praises to you Pever! Look forward to the things you bring to us in the future! πβ€οΈπ
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It may be too early of me, but I was impatient to leave a review. Writing quality is good with few to no errors. And the story and characters are well me. The world background is simply awesome, with functional society and world. Only thing it needs is daily updates. Hope you are able to reach 1000powerstone goal.
I am definitely impressed with authorβs world-building! Itβs far better than mine and I shall make this as a referencr for how I should build my world. The book is dynamic, and the time jump is interesting I felt as if there was a lot of info-dumping in the first chapter but imo it really helps establish the world. <3 Good job Author!
Out of the many new stories that I have read so far here, this one genuinely resonates with me in a spiritual level... I love how the story progresses, love the interesting world-building and the flow of the story! Really looking forward to read more, and don't forsake quality for the sake of quantity!