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In world of One Piece

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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv13NewGoldie

The MC get Nerfed then buffs then Nerfed again, the inconsistent power that MC have is kinda SHitTy. Atless you got one consistent about the MC that's his power and personality "Bland ".

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CxD18
CxD18Lv3CxD18

Mc gets flying thunder God and lighting logia fruit as powers. And what does author do, directly nerf him. Like ever heard of flying thunder God jutsu with a distance limit of 5 m and only usable once an hour. A logia user spends half an hour dodging a tiger without haki. I mean come on logia user have all attacks pass through them without haki.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

MC is neutered as ****..he has flying raijin and lightening DF but author neuters him so much, plus MC is bland, there not personality to him......................... Author, u shouldnt neuter him, I suggest rewrite cause as this is, its bad,

Imperial_Fox
Imperial_FoxLv4Imperial_Fox

Author nerfed the **** out of MC, he is supposed to be lightning man with flying thunder God, and still can't travel 1/100 the speed of lightning, even more that author doesn't consider Devil fruit's abilities, he trained for like a year and still only knows how to throw lightning bolts thatt only burns trees, and there was enel, who could literally vaporise island using it without training. Flying thunder God was neutered so much that it is actually better to not use it in battle as it is '''stamina consuming'''. And he doesn't even receives a observation boost of lightning DF like Enel, I feel that enel might be a better DF user than MC.

LordofMountains
LordofMountainsLv3LordofMountains

trash novel and the author seems he doesn't know anything about physics and one-piece retard mc and in the middle, it will turn into harem to cover his poor writing and creativity as usual

Frostbaba
FrostbabaLv11Frostbaba

Plot is right up my alley keep it up author kun🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Matthew_Morrison
Matthew_MorrisonLv1Matthew_Morrison

This is the most boring **** I ever read it is basically wish fulfillment with my killing everyone except Luffy family and crew. Also the writing quality is beyond **** it even surprised me.

Immortal_Lover
Immortal_LoverLv4Immortal_Lover

I hope the author study more about the powers of the mc. I'm still at early chapter but the development is very very poor. It makes my IQ so low. I hope it will improve soon. you nerfing him TOO MUCH doesn't make sense at all. I'm okay with the stamina part but the observation haki, ew. Enel literally covered the whole sky island with his haki after he ate the devil fruit. And I believe he didn't even train that much in it at all. The ftg part, I don't know how did you got the idea to add that. If you didn't know the meaning of putting a mark at a specific target, then I just wish you didn't include the ftg at all. That's all. I hope the story gets better as the chapters goes on. And please no more nerfing as it is really a major turn off to majority of the reader. If you are nerfing him, I hope you give us an acceptable reason/s. Have a nice day!

Rabin_Subedi
Rabin_SubediAuthorRabin_Subedi

Well, I am the author of this Fanfic so I will give it five stars. Please do read my fanfic this is my first time writing so please be lenient on me.

Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14Carefree_Sensei

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swordking01
swordking01Lv13swordking01

GooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddGoooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddd

4bidienkingdom
4bidienkingdomLv64bidienkingdom

Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.

Pratik_Subedi
Pratik_SubediLv1Pratik_Subedi

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Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

keep up the great work..............................................................................................................................................................................

Ainzsamaa
AinzsamaaLv2Ainzsamaa

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Min_May_Loe
Min_May_LoeLv13Min_May_Loe

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Reykun
ReykunLv12Reykun

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

Ambika_Sharma_9917
Ambika_Sharma_9917Lv1Ambika_Sharma_9917

Its really nice we need more. Its really nice we need more. Its really nice we need more. Its really nice we need more. Its really nice we need more.

Mr_John_Wick
Mr_John_WickLv14Mr_John_Wick

Author need MC too much. The FTG I understand but the DF is just nerfed too much especially in a world where if someone week eats a logia then they are pretty much invincible until the encounter someone that counters it, has another logia or has Haki and even then they can put up a good fight. All of those scenarios would probably happen somewhere towards sabaody or if they are just unlucky. Not to mention the lack of creativity with his moves. I mean just shooting a lightning bolt that isn't even the speed of lightning and covering himself in lightning when he is lightning are ****ty attacks. Just look at enel he was op as hell with no training except for making his moves which were cool as hell. The only good thing about his moves is marking his lightning with the FTG.

Nirjung_Dangi
Nirjung_DangiLv2Nirjung_Dangi

Want more chaps plz...I love your creativity...........Namaste from nepal...Plz do write and publish more chapter haii boro..hjr manxay lastai dami...jay Nepal..