I'm a prick. Calling people mongrel and look down on everybody. likes and dislike 1. Gold? And shiny things. 2. Virgin girls? 3. Stepping on someone's face? Dislike maybe just 2. Gods and snakes.
is just a waste of time in my opinion having read it to chapter 47 is kinda sUcks. it has some typos and grammar mistakes not bad overall is just the story progression that is kinda bad. its just getting slow and boring but I keep going cuz of the MC but the author just fucK that up by changing MC mid story.
its pose the same problem with AGM. When having heavily invested to the Orginal Main character then changing it mid-way is kinda suck to read even when you say they have the same personality the moment you label it as a clone its really not the same his just fake copy of the main character. that why I'm dropping it here its just sad you really did have a fun story but the way it heading now I'm out I just don't feel same story that I like in early chapters.
well its true his not versatile enough compared to Ainz when letaraly he almost got two shot by other players when ainz himself survived a battle against Shalltear that is a full counter to Ainz build. And about the guild weapon his a Warior he cannot use the guild weapon to 100% cuz his not primarily build to be mage that game mechanic is same in the New World.
I knew this when I was still playing FGO a year and now I'm a Genshin guy; but still a fan of Nasuverse .
it's not about if is chakra based, you can based the devil fruit on anything may it be chakra,mana,nature, life force, ki, chi, or force I don't care. but if you lock his power just to Nerfed so he can play with bunch of kids; nah men. early chapters should be the highlight of why we should like your character not outright hate your MC this early in the story. The reason why I drop this fanfic is (Nerfed Unlikable Main Character). piece of advice make your character likeable in early chapters if your character have a a strong power don't outright Nerfed him to the point of being useless. example of a good Nerf: since you based it in chakra his not intangible to a strong wind user/jutsu or a rubber kekkei genkai is a good counter to him.
why? even in the start your already Nerfing him like wtf. I just dont understand Nerfing characters just to have a fight scene with bunch of kids, why? why did even give him that power in the first place if just gonna nerf him anyway. You can always go the route weak to strong. not just to Nerfed him just to start weak bullShiiit, there's a difference. cuz we gonna have a boring training arc just to power up your already boring MC( in hindsight he is already strong). Now the MC kinda getting worse by the minute personality wise. You have a Nerfed character + his unlikable personality then you have unenjoyable reading experience.
for now yeah. but if you gonna keep making the MC a side character then that I don't like or either your side character that I dont like ("Kisame") replacing your MC screen time. fanfic should be focused in your MC in my opinion that's why I tends to stay away to fanfic with excessive OC characters and drop it.