Review Detail of amaturewriter in In world of One Piece

Item: In world of One Piece
Rating: 1

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amaturewriterLv43yramaturewriter

MC is neutered as ****..he has flying raijin and lightening DF but author neuters him so much, plus MC is bland, there not personality to him......................... Author, u shouldnt neuter him, I suggest rewrite cause as this is, its bad,

In world of One Piece

Rabin_Subedi

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Rabin_SubediAuthorRabin_Subedi

Sorry i will try my best to improve 🙁🙁

3yr

amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

U story isnt bad, its the powers, u neutered em too much

Rabin_Subedi:Sorry i will try my best to improve 🙁🙁

3yr

ASTARTELv12ASTARTE

Nerfed?

3yr

amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

yes?

ASTARTE:Nerfed?

3yr

ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Harem. .....? Even if it is I won't read it cause of nerfed.

amaturewriter:yes?

3yr

amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

I dropped, idk.sorry

Shadewind:Harem. .....? Even if it is I won't read it cause of nerfed.

3yr

ShadewindLv6Shadewind

It's okay

amaturewriter:I dropped, idk.sorry

3yr