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Iam happy today i found 2 good novels that reminded me of the time i started reading webnovels for first time 6 years ago, nowadays all the novels are just trash cans filled with harem cliches or romance although it can appeal for new reader but old reader like me feel bored its good to find something good to read keep the good work up đđ
wow i read this before but the translation was very bad and ruined my day keep the good job dude i love the novels with teacher mc and old mc h was searching for one and thanks to god i found this
Tong tong Shinya?? Iam dropping this the translation is trash
Man go read HP before translating professor Mc is not male its female its not college but houses
Ah idont really read the notes most of the time but the thing is not about slow development for me but about the characters themselfs I felt like they are just bunch of fools taken from a chinese cultivation novel just present for face slapping and making the Mc and his friend looks good this is my honest review I hope you can work on that a little as for your writing consistancy and world background they seems good and idea is good too keep the good work up!
I think the story is just not that interesting compared to others from the same genre the man was a king but his character is just like any average person also through the chapters he plays just a supporting role and instead of trying to improve himself and widen his view about the supposly different world to improve his acting he focuses in helping the formal female friend of the dead guy but the writing is consistent and that's an advantage at least but the characters are cringey to me especially the rich female girl that suddenly pooped out and saw something interesting in Mc without any prober reason just for the plot
I think you should make the Mc focus on the moral side of his disciples too, because he may end up with a bunch of people with young master syndrome Also I feel that the interaction between Mc and disciples is devoid of emotions you can work on that too, I hope this review helps