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I loved the concept of this story. The plot is good. The characters are good. Build-up is good. Selene is beautifully described as well as the mystical world full of magic around her. Your grammar and writing style is also nice and easy to understand, I am really in love with this story so far. Keep updating Good Work. :)
Hey, Author is really into the story world, and takes us readers travel with her too, the chapters hook me, really liked selene(nice name) and dorothy's friendship, writing quality and world building is awesome, really makes one eager to know her identity and the worlds he travel.... it's tagged that u r participating in spirity awards good luck there [img=recommend] [img=update]