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There are a lot of things I would like to say about this, so I would just summarize it into points:- 1) There are 2 many worlds mashed together in this fic that its honestly way too confusing, I know author tried to give a reason which were the gates that appeared in the gate anime( sorry forgot its name) but that doesn't make it any less confusing but this is a minor inconvenience at most and shouldn't affect much 2) Due to it being a mash of many worlds the power scaling is confusing to me, they are not dragon ball z level of power scaling but just having Reinhardt in the fic make me confused because he was a broken character but it also have fairy tail characters which means it has gods and dragon kings which makes me more confused , and I think he also intends to add the problem children and comming anime and that would also make things messy. 3) There is an op tag in the novel but that is wrong, you said that you don't want to make him too strong in just one chapter but then why put a op tag for the fic,you could have just put weak to strong in it and with the characters like Reinhardt in his world I can't see him becoming op Overall the selling point of this novel is yanderes and he is taking there relations in a slow way and building it up instead of rushing on, so that's a plus Overall I would give it a 4
Coming from the Authors Gojo book I expected top tier stuff but honestly I was extremely disappointed, the tags 'harem, romance, adventure' are absolutely void as the book doesn't contain any form harem until the very end which is basically just a "haha trolled you, you just read my novel so I could bamboozle you with a cliffhanger where my protag didn't even meet all of the supposed harem members much less actually date them oh and that thing about yandere? It won't even make a difference in this novel it'll be used for comedic purpose few times thats it." Not to mention the 0% romance and action...I'm not sure if the author was trolling with this novel but it makes me feel better assuming they were so yeah.
A very honest review. First of all let me just say, the book is good but also isn't. I say it's good because I like the characters in the book but also do not like it because if the way the author is writing it. I also write a book so from my perspective there is so much more you can do with this book. This book is like an out line you write before you start the book. there are so many gaps that need to be properly written and elongated in the story. you are not giving time for the characters to develop at all and the story is like major chunks and honestly it is very off putting for a reader who likes to read a book in detail and not just like some points in an outline. I highly advise you to re write the story with more detail and character development. I will continue to read it in hope that it will improve but if it doesn't I only wish u best of luck.
So the world background is a bit cluttered with all the different animes in play but the mc is aware of this and it makes it so the world is more unpredictable. The writing quality is great. Story development is equally exciting, filled with, for a lack of better words, good exposition, and doesn't majorly force a situation into play. As always of author-san, the MC's character is great and more deep and fleshed out than I once thought.
Hello I'm here to give my input it good book and good concept to it was my first time reading a yandere harem butt,IT DOES NOT HAVE ROMANCE IN IT like watt you gather girls and does not romance in it in short this book just gathers girls or potential yandere, well anyways world building is good or decent world's a mess it blutly shows human ignorance or arrogance, characters are good know some or most theme
This story is really far from perfect and there is way too much unexplained stuff... if anything this felt more like a side story rather than an actual story. However even with every one of those flaws this story is still really enjoyable. Dont be fooled by the title as it isnt even a big role in the story...its more about MC character and his journey in doing certain stuff in the span of 60 chapters... I wouldve liked more romance/harem part after the whole arc but meh the ending is bitter sweet so I shall therefore imagine the proper ending in my head. Thank you for this enjoyable story authior-sama
Finished reading and what can I say, what a blast. I got a good few chuckles reading it and a surprisingly "fun" MC to boot. The world building was a well thought out mix of several animes. The only downside is the story length itself is rather short and slightly open-ended. I believe there's a second part coming out but not sure if its connected. Thanks for the story author!