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A very honest review. First of all let me just say, the book is good but also isn't. I say it's good because I like the characters in the book but also do not like it because if the way the author is writing it. I also write a book so from my perspective there is so much more you can do with this book. This book is like an out line you write before you start the book. there are so many gaps that need to be properly written and elongated in the story. you are not giving time for the characters to develop at all and the story is like major chunks and honestly it is very off putting for a reader who likes to read a book in detail and not just like some points in an outline. I highly advise you to re write the story with more detail and character development. I will continue to read it in hope that it will improve but if it doesn't I only wish u best of luck.
Crazy Girls : Crossover Yandere Harem
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I just read ur chapter about dropping in trails. Not to be rude but if u really are the same author, why is the standard decreasing? again not meant to be rude.
HIKARU_GENJI:đ
Perhaps because it's a first person story very different from Trials. Though to be honest even if you say not to be rude asking someone about his decreasing standards is still rude đ But more seriously, I do not personally think my standards decreased. I just changed my style. In Trials I took more than fifty chapters just to develop Himiko, Momo and Kuroha. Here the pace is faster and not as focused on character building as I was in Trials. Different styles diffĂ©rents focus.
Cruchymonster:I just read ur chapter about dropping in trails. Not to be rude but if u really are the same author, why is the standard decreasing? again not meant to be rude.
hmm oh shit if it was rude sorry man. well I understand wat u said the pacing is quite different as u said. well then and again it might be me who likes more character development and a nice slow paced story. well do it best.
HIKARU_GENJI:Perhaps because it's a first person story very different from Trials. Though to be honest even if you say not to be rude asking someone about his decreasing standards is still rude đ But more seriously, I do not personally think my standards decreased. I just changed my style. In Trials I took more than fifty chapters just to develop Himiko, Momo and Kuroha. Here the pace is faster and not as focused on character building as I was in Trials. Different styles diffĂ©rents focus.
No worries man. I like the way you asked because it isn't insulting. Very different from most readers on Qidian who act as if they always know better and do not respect the authors
Cruchymonster:hmm oh shit if it was rude sorry man. well I understand wat u said the pacing is quite different as u said. well then and again it might be me who likes more character development and a nice slow paced story. well do it best.