Reviews of Konrad’s adventures in the multiverse. Vol 1
Konrad’s adventures in the multiverse. Vol 1
Blacklares
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- Character Design
- world background
Stories amazing as ****. its DOPE.... like its well written and has a decent plot and it inst the sad **** ,,,,now why would something amazing ever deserve a single star...stupidity..thats why.. C7, MC tells hermione, a child, barely 5... that he is a magician and a re- incarnated dude....like the hell?...I dont care how amazing child is, no way should MC tell a child he is magic, and reincarnation is off limits...at best, at best lovers, thats it...no one else..so yah...she donst have the mentality to grasp the context of what MC is saying...plus so far MC is an ***** in a child,,the **** dosnt he have the brains to understand his stupidity...should've kept magic secret till 10 yrs or something...and his reincarnation ****, absolutely off limits this stupid **** ****ed it up...like shes a kid,.....she dosnt understand secrets,,,its stupid...plus, no matter how smart a child is,,,,wizard or not...noo way in hell can they read books about atoms and ****.. 5 or 6 yrs aint enough to understand scientific concepts...so author bru,,,,a suggestion, re-write c7 and c6...
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The story is well written. Its just a shame that its all child smut. I find it disturbing that what I suspect is an *****, is writing ecchi child stuff and feels the strong need to frequently point out their ages in such scenes. There are also indicators that the story will head into beastiality as well. The terrible thing is that the story is well written plot wise, and without the abundant child smut would actually be a good read...
amazing story found my self smiling through out the story. please don't drop can't wait for tournament arc. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Overall Rating: Average at best. Well written with less to no grammatical errors. Cons (Not my cup of tea): Story development & MC progression is a bit lame as it still carries the "kid/child" genre the cannon has. It mainly focuses on romance & tons of researches which kinda suck as it only caters on teens or below adult level IQ & EQ. Still kudos to author-san for writing this fanfic, it's just not to my expectations.
I read first two paragraphs of this work and the description of main character is so similar to myself that I'm starting to think that author is secretly stalking me. I don't know how he got ahold of this information but if I find someone suspicious going after me I'll call the police. Looking at the awesome story so far I'll read more to find what more he knows about me... If I suddenly die and reincarnate you all know who to blame for this.
