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BizyLock1yrCommentedshe doesn't wear one= true canon
[Anko's Panties]- BizyLock1yrCommented
should have used sheer fu-ing will
Guy nodded and answered, "Listen the three of you, Akihiko is more than a genius. He is a man of focus, commitment and sheer YOUTH!!! He trained extremely hard everyday and his hard work paid off. That's how he became strong. Remember that." - BizyLock1yrCommented
10 fics - same name, it might as well be canon at this point
"Bing... Bing'er, yeah I will just call you Bing'er," Noah finally said without thinking much about it. - BizyLock1yrCommented
pera= wait or pear the fruit pt-br too, you really need a beta mano ou pelo menos usa o grammarly sei la
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village of the hidden leaf in PT-BR
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its funny reding this after playing Elden Ring...hard yeah
Diluc's dance of death would now begin. Iudex Gundyr was a boss that was completely unreadable. He would always combine normal sweeping attacks and then follow them up with kicks and charges. Now that he was a real combatant, his attacks became even more difficult to read. - BizyLock1yrCommented
should have been a ted monkey - mini enma
After that, Hiruzen went to his seat, opened the drawer, took out a cute teddy bear and took a nap. - BizyLock1yrCommented
joining the 50% of the population I guess, the other half is in blissful ignorance or apathy
But now I can responsibly state that my biggest fear is the unknown. - BizyLock1yrCommented
soldiers all around the word swetdrop[img=fp]
Okay, seriously, saving idiots is a thankless task, and risking your skin at the same time… - BizyLock1yrCommented
preach brother
I didn't save the girl from the truck-san, because there are a lot of girls, and my mother has only one George. - BizyLock1yrCommented
kit eyes she is a fox not a cat
Kunou said while making some 'kitty' eyes at her mother. Yasaka let out a sigh at that and nodded her head at her daughter. - BizyLock1yrReplied to Clercho
ty
At some distance, in the 'adults' area, everyone was observing the interaction between the new generation of Devils. Erik had a small smile on his face, just like his wives, Serafall, Musashi, Ching Shih, and Leona, had too. When the interaction ended, with Roney and his siblings showing that they were no pushovers, Leona let out a giggle. - BizyLock1yrCommented
i actually do u desperetly need a beta but the pacing is moving but not rushing, just plz dont make a multicrossover, stick to cameos if u like plz
[A/N:Do you like the how the story is progressing till now.] - BizyLock1yrCommented
who is Leona again? harem for the numbers sake and no development makes for bland characters... u could kill all his kids and half of his wives and i wouldnt even know u did. and i read harry's new game on ffn and have 0 problem following
At some distance, in the 'adults' area, everyone was observing the interaction between the new generation of Devils. Erik had a small smile on his face, just like his wives, Serafall, Musashi, Ching Shih, and Leona, had too. When the interaction ended, with Roney and his siblings showing that they were no pushovers, Leona let out a giggle. - BizyLock1yrCommented
shah long suckers! yehaaa
"Then, Shah Long would be your name from now on." - BizyLock2yrCommented
You should give him the tittle Hunstman Student or aprentice, to give xp boost , its normal
Chapter 21: Team GRNN (Green) (1) - BizyLock2yrCommented
probably peeves
The rivalry between houses was still present, but it was much more tame. It was now more like a friendly rivalry instead of a hostile one. This was mainly because of the black metallic hooks that were retrieved from each Common Room. A more thorough investigation of them by a curse breaker hired by Director Bones revealed that they had the purpose of making people distrust other people that were not under the influence of the artifact, making so when the students were in their common room, they were being influenced to be distrustful of everyone but their housemates. Who had put the artifacts there was still a mystery for everyone, but the important thing is that now they were out of the school. - BizyLock2yrCommented
Café de l'Arc sounds like lark which makes it sound like the fake cafe
Moments later, Coco and Velvet arrived at Café de l'Arc. Coco saw that it had a nice homely vibe to it and was quite refreshing. But then she saw that it was being managed by two humans, which got her nervous for Velvet. While Coco was hesitating to enter, Jaune saw her and waved her and Velvet in. - BizyLock2yrCommented
did noone read the og fic? they mature at 13 to look like a 17 yo;;; its that fast growth that allows the city to defend from the waves
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