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Hi all! Author here! I just want to set out a *Disclaimer* for all those that happen to come by my story: This story switches from 1st and 3rd person throughout. The chapters that are started with "Cairo" are told in the 1st person. All other chapters are in 3rd person. Also, English is not my first language! Please be weary of that. Therefore, I greatly appreciate any feedback and reviews anyone might give. It not only encourages me to keep writing more, but it also highlights errors and mistakes I should improve in. Once again, thank you, and I hope you enjoy!

Love the plot!!! It keeps me captivated, plus it's easy to imagine all the scenarios happening. I really recommend this book to people who love a bit of mystery and suspense. Nice work👍👍👍

I would totally recommend this to anyone! There are books that make me feel all warm, books that make me live the emotions and events, it's rare to come across them but this managed to be one of them. I especially love how you use your words, there's so much detail into it and a picture almost comes into mind. Overall, it's a perfect read.

We Are Cairo. The first person perspective puts readers in the place of the main character but the way the author had done it was extra. We simply do not read the story but it's as if we are living it through Cairo. His thoughts, his feelings and his motives. There is an interesting character dynamic that is well versed. The first few chapters gave me a The Witcher vibes but the story is headed in its own way. Don't know where yet but until chapter ten, that's what you could expect at least. Will be keeping this in my library to read more.

That was a well deserved five... I'll recommend everyone to come give it a try... I'm sure you'll love it. This one has mystery and suspense... that I always love.. then there is detailing of scenes that I felt like I should copy (will you let me copy it please?). All in all a good story. Now as for grammar.... okk... this.... for this I have to go and learn myself if I have to say anything about. Can just say better than mine. and one last thing, Mr.Author that book cover is good, would you mind making one for mine?

The story is quite captivating. It has a unique plot and a taste of suspense. The plot and the style of writing perfectly blend together which sustained the interest all throughout. Overall, I really like the story. Thumbs Up, Author!

First thing first: I LOVE THE COVER. It gives off some vibe I couldn’t quite explain. Like a lost man in the wilderness. Anyhow. The story is splendidly conveyed, and wonderfully written. Every description is engaging; there are just right amount of details—and just a tad of mystery. All of the components of a good story could be found right here. I won’t point out grammar because there’s nothing I could critique with that. Well-deserved five star. Good job.

Attention to detail is very good. The author is very good at describing locations and settings. The book is very immersive. Only thing I'd advise is for the author to read more books. The literary style suits the type of story he's going for, and the more he reads, the better it will get. Please keep writing and reading. I can't wait to see how good you'll get in the future.

Its a very nice story I am impressed..the theme is of a serious vibe..I feel it going throughout the story and stays consistent unlike many other stories..in my opinion that is which juts messes the atmosphere and destroys the pace..I can't say much...But I reached a certain enlightenment here...

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Dayum!!!! Love this story!! The characters are well written. Their interaction and personality!! Each traits of the characters..!! The author is really good at this!!

This is pretty well made. The caliber of writing here screams experience. I hope you keep writing, cause this is a rarity on the internet. Grammar has minimal to no errors. Prose and dialogue is also pretty good. I have no critique actually. Would recommend for someone that wants a breath of fresh air.

I don't know what happened since you ended Endless Sun but your writing has gotten ridiculously good. I'm absolutely loving this. And there needs to be more chapters ASAP. Anyone that's hesitating to read this. DO IT. YOU WONT REGRET IT.

Amazing. Absolutely loved it !!!! Though it is extremely short it is extremely captivating and gripping. The cliffhanger has totally gotten to me. So amazing job keep it up and pls update fast.

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Truly great start, wonderful synopsis.Even with few chapters it's looks really promising, smooth writing with good grammar. There's but,we need more chapters asap author-Sama please. You can check my work: The Prime, the story is good but I'm working on the grammar. Please leave your review and maybe added to your library, yours is already in mine.(already collected)