Attention to detail is very good. The author is very good at describing locations and settings. The book is very immersive. Only thing I'd advise is for the author to read more books. The literary style suits the type of story he's going for, and the more he reads, the better it will get. Please keep writing and reading. I can't wait to see how good you'll get in the future.
Snowin
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