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Hi all! Author here! I just want to set out a *Disclaimer* for all those that happen to come by my story: This story switches from 1st and 3rd person throughout. The chapters that are started with "Cairo" are told in the 1st person. All other chapters are in 3rd person. Also, English is not my first language! Please be weary of that. Therefore, I greatly appreciate any feedback and reviews anyone might give. It not only encourages me to keep writing more, but it also highlights errors and mistakes I should improve in. Once again, thank you, and I hope you enjoy!