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Very engaging and mystery filled. Good writing and nice pacing. No flaws that I can see, better than a ton of books I have read. Hope you continue the story looking forward.

Very engaging story, I probably love mystery which can easily draw people's attention and this one is one of that. I really love reading this story of 'Sarah' and I want more and more chapters.

This is a good story that's worth reading. I personally like novels with a mix of mystery. It's been a while since I read one and I enjoyed reading it! The grammar is good and only need to upgrade and describe more into the surroundings although I don't know if it would be described only in the later chapters for the plot. Overall, this make a good and nicely done story. The author's effort can clearly be seen! Keep it up, good luck author!

Interesting story with a great potential. There is mystery and Sarah does not know what is happening to her. I could not find any faults with the writing, Story Development, Character Design or the World Background. All the best ! 😊

Oh how I love your writing and the mystery you laid out in your story. It makes it so engaging that I flip the pages again and again trying to find out what’s happening to our MC. I’m also fond of how you convey the MC feeling. It’s so heartbreaking yet it’s so on point. Author, you really write this very well. Although they maybe grammar errors whatsoever, I won’t fuss about it ‘cos your story is good and I love the overflowing emotion. Not many people can describe such feeling beautifully. So here’s a five stars for you. Good luck with your story! ❤️

Very engaging, with few grammatical errors. I really like the cynical perspective of Sarah, it gives the story that much more depth. Very interesting story so far.

That slightly dark and mystery element draws people's attention easily. I like that darkness in reality, for example the death of the mother, and the stern teacher as well. Haha. I noticed some typo, but that's not a big deal, you just need to double-check it a bit.

Very engaging and mystery filled. Good writing and nice pacing. No flaws that I can see, better than a ton of books I have read. Hope you continue the story looking forward.

Nice opening chapter, this one. Really sinks its teeth into you to read more. Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over won't fix. Prose and dialogue is excellent, flowing naturally and making the characters feel alive. Might want to get the 'said' replacement cheat sheet to spice the dialogue up even more. Over all, would recommend. Keep on writing 👍

Woah so much mystery. The characters and the world setup is nice. Such a mysterious world, got chills down my spine when I was reading it. Goes in my library. And the way you write is beautiful. As its the start I can't say anything much but till where I have reached it looks like we will be having some great chapters ahead. A beginner myself so I couldn't point out anything else. Well keep writing.

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