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The story has rich descriptions that are good in my opinion as it helps readers in imagining the story. The story also flows very smoothly. Writing quality though not perfect is good enough. The stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background is good for me. Keep going and writes to your heart content :)
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A well thought out story with a great plot. The story and plot flow smoothly. The characters are very dynamic and well made, and they tie the story together. The MC, Ryne has a distinct character and is very likeable. The dialogues are well written. I also like his friend Gard he seems quite wise oddly. Sophilia is another interesting character. I think the story will have a great future and I can not wait to read more. Well done!
I think the story flows really well, very interesting, definitely a good read, can't wait to see what the author does with it later on, I think it's going in a good direction so far. A long read, but a good one that pulls you in enough to make want to know what else is going to happen all in all. A very good story!
I think the series holds a lot of potential. Regardless of my personal skills as a writer, I've perused a variety of works online and offline, and I find your work to be pretty solid. I have but one suggestion of my own. I feel your talents are better spent aiming for independent release or release as a series of books online or in stores, rather than as a series of Arcs detailed in a Webnovel format. This is simply because the nature of your work, in my belief, would be better represented through the structure of physical or digital novels. But hey, you do what you wanna do, this is just a suggestion on my part. I just feel your frequency of updates and revisions alongside the content size of each update lends itself better to a book series format.