BlueObserver
Im sorry but this literally a rip off of Goddess of Ice: Reborn as Naruto’s Twin sister. There are so many grammatical errors it hurts to read, pacing is all over the place, and there is absolutely nothing original about it. It completly skips the begining of their life unlike Goddess of Ice, with the sorry excuse of “you will get your memories back later.” I highly recommend you go read Goddess of Ice if you want essentially the same plot with far better writing quality, characters, and absolutely hilarious.
A solid fanfic. Although I've already read a similar fanfic, this one was still good, and added original content. Scarlet is a great MC, and she really adds to the plot. Writing quality could be better though. Biggest disappointment is that the story hasn't been updated in a long time. Hope the author comes back and continues!
already watched boruto: naruto's next generation? boruto is son of naruto and in episode 129, he travels to the past shortly after sasuke leaves the village to train with orochimaru, when he goes to the past, he ends up meeting his father: naruto, the mother: hinata, anyway everybody very young. I would like to know if you are going to create a chapter based on this episode. I don't know if you've watched it, if not, you can read a review ... just the fact that escarlet meets his nephew ahead of time ...
please continue this is one of the better ff I have read on the naruto world without crossovers I get sometimes why ff are dropped but still please continue. I love the character development. the possible love intrest is actually very fascinating and the character growth with saskue is definitely a different spin
Hello Blue, I'm being a little shameless here. I have been reading your novel and it inspired me to do my own fan fiction. I don't own a word program and am to lazy to constantly correct my grammar. Even though English is my second language since my family speaks Spanish. Like others have said love the constant updates but feel them a little short and sometimes u need more dialog. Then again I do the same sometimes on my new novel. I want you to check I out and give me your opinion about chapter if possible based on story not grammar since I know I mess up here and there. Here is the link of my fanfic. Usually based on 3rd point of view, 1st point of view and the thoughts of the main character. I have not done much about point of views of other characters. The name of the fanfic is Reborn as a Sarutobi in the Shinobi world. Or something similar to it. It doesn't have a picture. I still trying to figure out how to do that and it's been months. Damn phone making everything hard. Sincerely: IntactReincarnator