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Reviews of The Adventures of Naruto & Scarlet

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The Adventures of Naruto & Scarlet

BlueObserver

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BlueObserver
BlueObserverAuthorBlueObserver

Author here hope you liked the story till now , I'll try describe fights better from now on as I felt action was little lacking . Please comment any improvements you would like me to make in the story

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naughty_girl123
naughty_girl123Lv4naughty_girl123

Very good book with outstanding vocabulary . The story progress is rather slow not that I m8nd though. Hope to see an OP mc and would like to see the combination of scarsasu

ganeshreddy_Konda
ganeshreddy_KondaLv2ganeshreddy_Konda

Good novel, although it is slow paced it is good to read , looking forward to ice release Scarlet . have to crimson red hair and ice release together give a diffrent feeling though

BlueObserver
BlueObserverAuthorBlueObserver

Author here i plan to make pairing as sauske x Scarlet so for all the sasusaku fans hope you'll forgive me for this pairing. Hope you enjoy the series

Deathunterz123
Deathunterz123Lv14Deathunterz123

Im sorry but this literally a rip off of Goddess of Ice: Reborn as Naruto’s Twin sister. There are so many grammatical errors it hurts to read, pacing is all over the place, and there is absolutely nothing original about it. It completly skips the begining of their life unlike Goddess of Ice, with the sorry excuse of “you will get your memories back later.” I highly recommend you go read Goddess of Ice if you want essentially the same plot with far better writing quality, characters, and absolutely hilarious.

Some_Random_Man
Some_Random_ManLv12Some_Random_Man

Good story, keeping to the main one with some minor(maybe major later) additional details. The writing does need a bit more work but overall it is very good. Keep up the good work.

BlueObserver
BlueObserverAuthorBlueObserver

Author here, shamelessly voting for my book, hope you all will like it . I plan to go with usual naruto story with some modifications this is my first story hope you pardon my lack of creativity . I will strive to improve slowly

lstreader
lstreaderLv14lstreader

A solid fanfic. Although I've already read a similar fanfic, this one was still good, and added original content. Scarlet is a great MC, and she really adds to the plot. Writing quality could be better though. Biggest disappointment is that the story hasn't been updated in a long time. Hope the author comes back and continues!

Surya_Gireesh
Surya_GireeshLv2Surya_Gireesh

Good novel i have always wanted to read a proper naruto fanfiction bust in most of the books the mc just surpasses sage of six paths and goes to other anime world . Proper naruto fanfiction can be counted on fingers . Thank you for your hard work

Steven_Beck_5008
Steven_Beck_5008Lv4Steven_Beck_5008

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖

Alanwalker4
Alanwalker4Lv13Alanwalker4

Nice and pls keep updating. I like your pace style of story telling. Just make sure to flash out the main cast a bit more personality wise. So, lots of love and support for your work.

sans_gamerzinho
sans_gamerzinhoLv12sans_gamerzinho

already watched boruto: naruto's next generation? boruto is son of naruto and in episode 129, he travels to the past shortly after sasuke leaves the village to train with orochimaru, when he goes to the past, he ends up meeting his father: naruto, the mother: hinata, anyway everybody very young. I would like to know if you are going to create a chapter based on this episode. I don't know if you've watched it, if not, you can read a review ... just the fact that escarlet meets his nephew ahead of time ...

Arxellll
ArxellllLv14Arxellll

It's awesome because I've been searching about naruto that has a lovesick Uchiha Sasuke and a new character/s that can change the shinobi world

muriceking
muricekingLv4muriceking

This is the worst thing I’ve ever read in my life .............................................................................................

Nen_pin
Nen_pinLv3Nen_pin

They may be a lot of grammaticale errors but the plot... is so cool I think it's worth reading.

Zachary_Wagner_6576
Zachary_Wagner_6576Lv14Zachary_Wagner_6576

please continue this is one of the better ff I have read on the naruto world without crossovers I get sometimes why ff are dropped but still please continue. I love the character development. the possible love intrest is actually very fascinating and the character growth with saskue is definitely a different spin

Da_Zapper
Da_ZapperLv3Da_Zapper

lovely story the slow pacing allowed me to pay attention to each character individually. all in all it's great would love to see follow it till the end

Blue_Rose_Moon
Blue_Rose_MoonLv14Blue_Rose_Moon

I live for Sasuke’s crush on MC, it is sooo cute! I mean just look at this stubborn little tomato loving muffin!❤️🍅❤️🍅❤️🍅❤️ I think I hear wedding bells!🎊👰🏼‍♀️🤵🏻🎊👰🏼‍♀️🤵🏻🎊👰🏼‍♀️🤵🏻🎊 🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻🥷🏻

DaoistNqGhWv
DaoistNqGhWvLv1DaoistNqGhWv

•It was amazing though I hope you can update soon please.🥺😊Also the story development was on the right past not to fast but not to slow either so over all love the story but please like I said before update more if you not to busy.

IntactReincarnator
IntactReincarnatorLv13IntactReincarnator

Hello Blue, I'm being a little shameless here. I have been reading your novel and it inspired me to do my own fan fiction. I don't own a word program and am to lazy to constantly correct my grammar. Even though English is my second language since my family speaks Spanish. Like others have said love the constant updates but feel them a little short and sometimes u need more dialog. Then again I do the same sometimes on my new novel. I want you to check I out and give me your opinion about chapter if possible based on story not grammar since I know I mess up here and there. Here is the link of my fanfic. Usually based on 3rd point of view, 1st point of view and the thoughts of the main character. I have not done much about point of views of other characters. The name of the fanfic is Reborn as a Sarutobi in the Shinobi world. Or something similar to it. It doesn't have a picture. I still trying to figure out how to do that and it's been months. Damn phone making everything hard. Sincerely: IntactReincarnator