Review Detail of IntactReincarnator in The Adventures of Naruto & Scarlet

Hello Blue, I'm being a little shameless here. I have been reading your novel and it inspired me to do my own fan fiction. I don't own a word program and am to lazy to constantly correct my grammar. Even though English is my second language since my family speaks Spanish. Like others have said love the constant updates but feel them a little short and sometimes u need more dialog. Then again I do the same sometimes on my new novel. I want you to check I out and give me your opinion about chapter if possible based on story not grammar since I know I mess up here and there. Here is the link of my fanfic. Usually based on 3rd point of view, 1st point of view and the thoughts of the main character. I have not done much about point of views of other characters. The name of the fanfic is Reborn as a Sarutobi in the Shinobi world. Or something similar to it. It doesn't have a picture. I still trying to figure out how to do that and it's been months. Damn phone making everything hard. Sincerely: IntactReincarnator