Reviews of Alter Ego: His Sultry Lover
Alter Ego: His Sultry Lover
SunScar9
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I read the mature content, I came like a honeybee.🔥🔥 The writing was so smooth. It was hell amazing. The scene was explained with minor details making it lively and feels like I am watching it rather than reading. 😍😍🔥❤️ Just read the first chapter and you know what I am talking about. 😁😁❤️
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Now you are asking yourself if you should give this novel a try? The answer is found in the first chapter. 🤭 Plot kinda has a Slight Smile is Very Charming vibe to it, with the MC as hardcore gamers and met online first except this time it's in reverse since it was the FL who seeked the ML in the game.. plus in this story they are adults and not uni students. So far, the ML is a little fleshed out; a little backstory from him as an actor and how he is coping with the the demands of showbusiness. However, the FL is a bit bland for me, like her dialogues doesn't show who she is as a person. Like everything about her so far is shallow. If you get my drift. Since there's only 6 chapters, the personality of the characters hasn't been explored that much yet which I am looking forward to reading.
Hot scenes plus good character introduction and riveting stories are the perfect recipes for a good romance novel for me. And this novel has all that and more! I am glad to see another book that has the potential to go beyond the norm. I heard that the author is really good at delivering quality stories, too. I am looking forward to when the MC and FL will finally meet. Great start! 👍😍 To all the readers, once you read the first chap, you can never go back! 😅❤
Surprise friendly review! Ok I have to admit a few things: 1. I don't know the author well enough 2. Romance is usually not my cup of tea Despite that I will admit this author is in my eyes deserving of being called an author. Content: 4/5 as of chapter 4 Plot develops well and has good pacing that draws the reader into the plot. Setting of world is used carefully to ease the reader straight into the fantasy. Careful thought has defintiely been given into the work, it's not something done on the go to run with. Language: 3.5/5 This is good for readers with beginner to intermediate levels. Vocab used are simple to understand, you can read without dictionary. Grammar almost perfect. Proofing or checking was done, good job. Creativity: 3/5 Currently too early to judge due to only 4 chapters out. Other comment: I find the chapters slightly too short for any good sinking into the reading experience. before I can get invested, it's over and I need to go to the next chapter. Invested feeling came only somewhere in chapter 3 but it's gone as soon as it came. Overall: Good work, fighting!
I have never read a novel that start off on such a high and exciting note 🤭. I must admit that my curiosity about the content in the first chapter was what led me to read this novel (apart from recommendations from authors TheBlips and NixxxiE whose novels I'm currently reading *shameless advertising*). Before I knew it, I had finished reading all 5 chapters and was eagerly waiting for the next chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. I've not read any this author's other works so my extended review below is strictly based on this novel alone. Writing quality: Clear writing, easy to understand and sound grammar. Updating stability: It's just 1ch/day for now but I think the author is eager to give her readers a mass release once readership for this novel hits a certain level! So i'm hoping more readers will read this! 😁 Story development: It's still early but within the first few chapters, you are already introduced to the male lead and female lead separately. I look forward to seeing the two from vastly different backgrounds meet and how they grow from strangers to lovers. Character design: It's still early in the novel but I believe that we will get to know the characters better as the story progresses. World background: Apart from the world of Entertainment and eSports, what else will we get to see? Let's wait and see!
Yes I know the cover atm looks a bit... unappealing BUT TRUST ME. Only 6, lemme repeat only SIX, chapters in... and I'm already a mess. I stopped reading this author's other novel because the chapters were too pricey for my broke butt BUT THIS AUTHOR IS SUPER RELIABLE AND CONSISTENT. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 hint hint if you can't handle snu snu... maybe go read something else
I really don't have enough words in my dictionary to describe how fantastic-amazing-awesome this story/novel is. Keep in mind that this review is written after I had finished reading the whole novel. If you are searching for a Heartwarming, Romance with Fluffy and sexy moments, you have chosen the right book! Author Sun (Su di) her books had caught my attention in the features page and I don't know why but I ended up reading this book very randomly. And guess what? I have finished binge reading this in a whole 5 days. And Author Sun (Su di)...Hats Off and take my bow senpai, As a obsessed book and ebook reader, from my experience all I can say is This type of novel is very rare, and you are so talented! I really appreciate and admire you! I want to go further in my writing career by following you and addressing myself as your biggest fan (tho I can't get you a single cent because I can't and many more reasons, but worry not I will try by best to support you both financially and emotionally, and that's not a promise a fact!) And all I will say now is, Best of luck! Now gotta read "Cornerred By the CEO" again by Author Sun, I bet that's also a wholesome story! And reader if you ignore this novel, you're going to miss out.
The story is developing really well. 7 chaps are published and the flow is pretty good. Not too fast or slow. Loved the characters till now. Katherine's imagination was so crazy 😂 can't wait for them to meet. I hope his manager stephen gets paired up with Lily. 😉Oh yes, the English is bang on. No mistakes at all. Keept it up!
What a great novel. I love that it kept me entertained and interested throughout the entire novel. The plot is great; flows perfectly and I felt I was more in tune with the characters as well. Thank you author! Keep up the great work and I hope other readers will take a liking as I did in this story.
Can anyone hand me a glass of cold water over here? Cause after reading all the available chapters so far (in one go), got me feeling a little hot and thirsty over here hehe. But mature content aside, the concept of the story is original, I haven’t come across anything similar to it yet from my searches. Very interesting plot and can’t wait to see how it’ll develop. Kudos to the author for trying their best to keep the errors in terms of grammar and spelling at a minimal. For those who are like me and can’t help but cringe whenever you see errors in grammar or words used in the wrong context or spelled incorrectly, you won’t come across much (if any at all, I may say it’s less than 1-5%). Also, the author’s writing style is clean and pretty easy to follow, so the story doesn’t get confusing. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters! Hoping this won’t be one of those stories that are super long and dragged out with nonstop drama coming in between our main characters!
I convinced myself not to read this and wait for the chapters to pile up first. I failed miserably . I started reading and got hooked, now I'm desperately waiting for updates to cure my addiction and it's like a drop of water in the desert... Damn..I'm hooked can you tell? I love your simple way of writing dear author and how I don't have to correct any grammatical mistakes as I read. I can't wait for them to finally meet and overdose me with dog food...aaaah what a way to go
