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lmaopanda
lmaopandaLv55yr
2020-05-09 22:45

Can anyone hand me a glass of cold water over here? Cause after reading all the available chapters so far (in one go), got me feeling a little hot and thirsty over here hehe. But mature content aside, the concept of the story is original, I haven’t come across anything similar to it yet from my searches. Very interesting plot and can’t wait to see how it’ll develop. Kudos to the author for trying their best to keep the errors in terms of grammar and spelling at a minimal. For those who are like me and can’t help but cringe whenever you see errors in grammar or words used in the wrong context or spelled incorrectly, you won’t come across much (if any at all, I may say it’s less than 1-5%). Also, the author’s writing style is clean and pretty easy to follow, so the story doesn’t get confusing. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters! Hoping this won’t be one of those stories that are super long and dragged out with nonstop drama coming in between our main characters!

Alter Ego: His Sultry Lover

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