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Swaning
SwaningLv125yr
2019-11-30 13:45

I have never read a novel that start off on such a high and exciting note 🤭. I must admit that my curiosity about the content in the first chapter was what led me to read this novel (apart from recommendations from authors TheBlips and NixxxiE whose novels I'm currently reading *shameless advertising*). Before I knew it, I had finished reading all 5 chapters and was eagerly waiting for the next chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. I've not read any this author's other works so my extended review below is strictly based on this novel alone. Writing quality: Clear writing, easy to understand and sound grammar. Updating stability: It's just 1ch/day for now but I think the author is eager to give her readers a mass release once readership for this novel hits a certain level! So i'm hoping more readers will read this! 😁 Story development: It's still early but within the first few chapters, you are already introduced to the male lead and female lead separately. I look forward to seeing the two from vastly different backgrounds meet and how they grow from strangers to lovers. Character design: It's still early in the novel but I believe that we will get to know the characters better as the story progresses. World background: Apart from the world of Entertainment and eSports, what else will we get to see? Let's wait and see!

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