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filledelisle
filledelisleLv134yr
2019-11-29 03:20

Now you are asking yourself if you should give this novel a try? The answer is found in the first chapter. 🤭 Plot kinda has a Slight Smile is Very Charming vibe to it, with the MC as hardcore gamers and met online first except this time it's in reverse since it was the FL who seeked the ML in the game.. plus in this story they are adults and not uni students. So far, the ML is a little fleshed out; a little backstory from him as an actor and how he is coping with the the demands of showbusiness. However, the FL is a bit bland for me, like her dialogues doesn't show who she is as a person. Like everything about her so far is shallow. If you get my drift. Since there's only 6 chapters, the personality of the characters hasn't been explored that much yet which I am looking forward to reading.

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