ZGearCecil
Amazing story. The new character in the story makes deviations from the original but very subtle changes and has a very likeable personality that is very close to momonga but differs slightly in the way he treats people and his emotions when he makes choices. The author is very good in introducing new characters without changing the dark fantasy of Overlord.
I am enjoying this version and glad you brought it into the light! I like how Jack and Ainz decided to ally and be part of the same guild. I also think it's cool about Jacks new "race"(for those who don't know, Jack was an undead in a previous novel that was dropped by the author). I think this will make things more interesting! Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to what you bring in this time around! -LordTouchMe
Hello again, sorry for not replying on your previous comments but you cannot please everyone, even the best fanfic writer I follow has made some questionable world building and character development, that being said the best way to avoid writing yourself Into a dead-end is constantly reading your work and see FOR Yourself what you did wrong instead of listening to every single crybaby on this platform. I believe will all of that out of the way avoid weird traps that ultimately lead to leaving your novel filled with fillers like zealously describing everything. That's not needed, an apt and concise description will do. Harems are hard to maintain without making the other harem members seem like cardboard cutouts. 2 maximum is hard enough. Overpowered is not bad, Hyper plot armor is bad
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No Plot Holes so far, looking great! Protagonist likes what he sees, takes what he wants, but isn't salvage about it. A bit cruel and roundabout though, in a comedic sense. I also love how he used the term "Dergan," it's a very fitting for a stupid Skeletal Dragon. The Lord of the Dark Sion is pleased.
This is honestly one of the best, if not the best, Overlord fanfic I have ever read. The MC is OP and is not afraid to use his power. He also does not just take a back seat and let Ainz do everything. The chapter release rate is really high and the grammar is one of the best on the site. His skills are also unique and I like how he is set up. Keep up the good work.
Is it just me or is the quality better than the dropped one? Glad to know that the author has found what he wants. So far I am enjoying the chapters that have graced my eyes and suckered by brain. No harem? Sounds good to me. It's easier to think if there's only one other heart involved. People who want to have a harem can go to Colorado, they have a polygamist community there.