Reviews of The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy

Author Here, I'm a huge fan of the Sith, but I'm also a shameless Author so 5 Stars, but It would be great if we had a bigger star wars community on here Also you guys and gals and Attack helicopters should come join me on discord After all it takes more than one person to make a great Novel and World

It is good the update time is great and I sense a lot of inspiration in this story so good job and continue the hard work ok now then can you make him learn every part of the force

If you're a fan of short chapters, minions from every gacha who do all the work and a shallowly featured main character of Little depth after the isekai experience, then this is the story for you. Basically there is almost no story, just lottery draws that tend to give minions for the MC to put to work, not that much of it is featured beyond a sentence or two, it's mostly on to the next draw shortly there after. I was initially excited about a Starwars system in a fantasy world. Having a force user in the mix could be really awesome, such as stopping mages their fireballs n **** in mid flight, only to turn them back or redirect them. You know, the cool stuff. Instead you get this, some dude who relies on minions drawn from the Starwars universe and doesn't do much in battle. The story itself doesn't seem to put much elbow grease in world nor character building either, so all I can commend it on is its release rate and decent grammar. The concept had a lot of potential, but unfortunately the cool stuff isn't the focus, minion gathering and lotteries are. My guess is that he's going to take over the country soon, as he's training his minions using a dungeon.... But I expect atleast a dozen more chapters of lottery draws with minions resultant from that first. I mean no offence to the author but I sincerely feel that the potential of the story, the character and its world are wasted by the immense shadow the constant minion lottery rewards casts. Its frustrating, since the first chapter created such high quality expectations.

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Ok.....I guess. However, the problem is there are way too many cliches which makes it quite boring. Probably only the star wars system itself is the most interesting part as it provides mc star wars stuff/people in a generic typical fantasy world. What is most cliche and annoying is the humans oppressing demi-humans crap and mc somehow being angry and quite righteous about it. I swear, I saw EVIL MC tag so why does mc care about non-human slavery if his inspiring to be something of a sith. (Will my comment be deleted? I GOT.....way to many comments deleted for any sort of criticism in this site:P)

Nice book here, great author work and nice story development. Once you get to enjoy it you want more. Hopefully the author keeps posting because I want more!

God wtf why du you need so long vor chapters Not only Short ch but bad updeat Stabilität in normal Fan fic the authors write 1000-2000 words i hate This 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤢🤢😨😨😨😱😱😱😱😱😨😨🤢🤢😨😨😱😱😨🤢🤢😨😨😱😱😱😨🤢🤢😨😱😱😱😱🤢🤢🤢🤢😨😨😱😨🤢🤢🤢😨😨😱😱😱😨🤢🤢🤢😨😨😱😱😱😱😱😨😨😨😨

Well even though I am sorry about my misunderstanding and that I was that harsh with my review. I am a fan of star wars and I absolutly dislike it when it gets mixed with other worlds as most of the times the rules of the star wars universe are broken in the process. Also I prefer novels with a certain amount of logic within the rules they set for themselves. If two worlds are mixed usually the rules collide and the world gets chaotic unlogic and most of the time unreadable. That is why I was that harsh about your novel and why I won't read it anymore in future. I hope you forgive my former rudeness as I won't bother you anymore.

Don't drop it take it slow and make a chatper when you can. This story is hard to write because its star war so we do not expect it to get loads of chatpers in a short while of time. and if your thinking of making a new novel that is like star wars but not hard to write try Stargate atlantis?

Instead of the bucket why not make a new force skill that gets the water from the air and bath the water in the force and that is how the mc get water Instead of a magical bucket? love this book so far but do not destory the physics of the world.

Their are only two problems with this story that is the need for more character development and the second problem is the pace needs to be longer but still it is a great story. [img=update]

The base of the story is great, and it has amazing potential. I think you gave him to much power right off the bat. you need to grow the character more before a sudden power boost. It would be great to see the character have moral/emotional issues.

Truly one of the best out there. Sure some of them have better story, characters and all that but they all end up being dropped. This book is a 5 star in everything, at least for me, the story is getting updates, the story is great, the character are great and the mc is solid. I just hope he doesnt become too op too fast beacuse you will run out of stuff to make him do as nothing will be a challenge to him, and i hope, as the story is still in its early stages, that the mc doesnt turn out to be someone incapable of loving or stuff like that, i dont like emotionless characters, but i also hope he doesnt become too emotional (controlled and easily influenced into actions that arent good for him by his emtions) And that concludes my review. All in all this is a story with great potential and i cant wait to see how it develops.

hey do you thank you could continue the book I got reincarnated in to fallout it was really good. Also the book so far is really great and and come on here every day to see if you upload a new chapter.

yeah don't delete current chapters please it's a good reference to look back to, marker to see your progress as a writer and a good enough read to enjoy even with the few mistakes made.

I didn't finish first chapter before dropping this stupidity. Unrealistic start 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters

No story development and gacha system determines almost everything. Mc ramdomly steps into a tutorial fantasy world that does not correlate whatsoever to the Star Wars Universe. Meh.

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the manner of writing is very easy to understand. i do not get confused on the scenes. i am also a sith fan so i immediately read the novel, i liked how the story progressed. i hope the author introduce more sith characters

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