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alphaaffe19dReplied to _H1_There is a difference between using a new forging method that fits the technologically underderveloped setting and suddenly building a motorbike that certainly does not. A forging method could have been invented in a time like that but a motorbike certainly not. So it makes a difference. the difference is whether it fits the setting or it does not.
"Let us first think of a way to make some fuel. Then, I can create an engine according to that. Anyway, I need to get a bike as soon as I can. I really miss the feeling of riding." He spoke as he stood up and stretched his body lazily.- alphaaffe2mthCommentedCh 512 Chapter 512
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aren't 20 a day deadly? especially for a child?
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As long as the termites exist there shall be war. Even it will be an war of attrition that lasts for eternity only one race shall remain as the true colony of the dungeon. FOR THE COLONY!! xD
Colony v Colony pt 1 (of two hundred) - alphaaffe4mthCommentedCh 227 Christina Baker **
- alphaaffe4mthCommentedCh 754 Chapter 749: Soldier of War, 1 Versus 10,000
- alphaaffe4mthCommentedCh 313 Killing
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gave her a cringe.
Once again I turned to her and gave him a cringe. - alphaaffe5mthCommented
than not and
"Celia... A bitter truth is better and a sweet lie," I said. Of course, I meant my answer about the demons. - alphaaffe5mthCommented
Either "And what[...] must I do that for?" or "And Why [...] must I do that?"
Wei Wuyin chuckled heartily, "And why, my gorgeous phoenix, must I do that for?" - alphaaffe7mthReplied to Golummitesoro
that may be true but you can't deny the possibility of it happening or the chance that it already happened in the history of the human existence even if we only consider humans as humans from the point the first big civilizations began. I mean well over a billion humans and 7000 years of time? the possibility it didn't happen is probably smaller than that it did in all that time. Especially people an unexperienced, poor, young hunter in the medieval ages. They go out to hunt but can't find prey and while looking for it they lose their way get exhausted get a cramp and die... maybe it wasn't a puddle but a small river that was like a hand width deep and he cramped while trinking? Would be a believable scenario wouldn't it? well not that I thought about it when I wrote it. I just wrote down the first even worse death I could think of xD
I mean, mine was fine, but Garralosh and these two seem to have suffered some nasty stuff. - alphaaffe1yrReplied to Plot_armour
Yeah something unknown happens. But looking at the fact it is reality they are nearly shattering, maybe they should be a little more careful as there is a pretty high chance that the moment you shatter it everything is ripped apart and destroyed because the inability of everything to exist without reality. After all everything we know is reality and it seems pretty dumb to just throw that away just because there is an abysmally small possibility you might survive whatever happens. You see? whatever it is it isn't worth destruction of everything is it?
Ch 553 Even if I Have to Destroy the Universe - alphaaffe1yrReplied to gubba_paambe
I agree because this Siege is long enough by now... if it gets any longer you could write an own book for it :D And I disagree, because up till now it seemed like Rino knows what he is aiming for and if he planned a lot of plot for this siege then there will be a lot of plot. It only makes sense to cover plot during a siege as a siege usually takes some time. It is never easy to storm the enemies fortified position.... That is what fortified positions are made for aren't they? So I am not sure whether I can support the sentiment to shorten a needed and even logical part of the story which apparently carries some plot, just because it takes longer than the protagonist likes it... I mean it is still very well written and even though it feels like the siege is taking an eternity I thouroughly enjoy reading
Ch 565 The Siege pt 23 - alphaaffe1yrCommentedCh 334 Chapter 334
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You see... it kinda seems similar to the setting of Romeo and Julia... dont you dare to kill them or I will boycott your novel...
The battle raged around Isaac Bird and in the brief moments where he wasn't desperately trying to keep himself from getting skewered or sliced in half he had to wonder why he was even here. Peer pressure was part of it, he could admit that to himself. When three quarters of the guards under him had volunteered to go down and aid in the defence it would have looked a little ridiculous if he, their leader, didn't go with them. There was an element of pride, also. The ants had done much to help the refugees and now when a chance came for the people to return the favour it would be churlish to turn it down. Another part of him, a more honest part, was willing to admit that he'd hoped to see Morrelia here. When she'd left, all those weeks ago, he regretted not going with her, and now that she'd returned with the Legion, how could he not take this chance? What exactly he hoped to accomplish in wooing the woman who captured his heart with her fierce and headstrong ways from the opposite side of a battlefield, he wasn't sure, but it was worth a go! He hoped it was worth a go. - alphaaffe1yrCommented
sometimes I hate this author... and it doesn't even has to do something with Christine... It is just the eternity it takes to click through tens of sites see a single paragraph worth of something that was decided since Christine got a properly ****able body...
Ch 121 Harem Voting results - alphaaffe1yrCommented
You really created an own book for some Larry of your first books side event?
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