Aidka
Broken English and grammar, cartoony characters and absolutely no legitimate plot; the story is just not really worth the time. MC is in the role of "lul i could own this world if i wanted, but i don't, except, you know, i do, but i want a handicap, so watch me walk through the world blindfolded with my hands tied behind my back as i let people insult and spit on me where ever i go." which just never goes well for anyone involved. Either make him all powerful and all knowing as you intended at the start or have him actually face danger, interesting plots and put him in a position to work for it. What you've done is remove all sense of conflict and tensรญon right at the beginning of your story and then keep throwing various problems at him and force him to be pathetic in order to not show himself and fake tensรญon, and it's just not fun to read. You can't have your cake and eat it too. And, honestly, for someone on his 700th reincarnation, he is just ridiculously childish, but I suppose that reflects more on you as the writer.
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I really liked this novel in beginning, it started out pretty good but later author just fu**ed it up. Bull**** reasons to keep mc strength hidden even at situations where he should be domineering. Then he keep introducing too many harem members without giving any screentime to best waifus introduced in beginning, he just keep increasing them without any making balance among them. But the only reason why I still keep reading was that MC was too OP but again then author pulled out extreme forced and bull**** situation to restrict mc power. My opinion read only 15 to 20 chapter and if you don't like it then stop reading because it'll only get worse. P.S This is my first time writing a review. I'd never thought that my first review would be so harsh.
Lame This is stupid in many ways. Petty I say. He should have died from the first chapter. For such a spineless bastard. Even if they made a stupid fucking mistake to him it was started because of his incompetent father. He should have taken all his pettynes on him. Show results and represent an invisible profit and benefits to the (Kingdom. But no he just have to be a Man-child. Taking unrealistic girls left and right. Fucking rapist. This is why abortion is legal. He does not take action and control to make a better world nor destroy it. Instead he just keep fucking around. Another parasite to be cleansed. Lower than the enemies he faced. He took offense of such a childly ploy and instead of playing it off and be the bigger man, he fucking... DAMN YOU AUTHOR. YOU ARE A CORROUSIVE CUM STAIN. He is an immortal and the most powerful in this current "World". Proclaiming to be an Experienced Mother Fucker who has reincarnated for over seven hundered times (that is two times three hundred fifty Motha Facka). Experience being all archetypes. But still have an intellegence lesser than of an Ant. I hope those over seven hundred worlds are okay. For an Immortal, he is a disgrace. A Pretentious Cunt. Having thoughts that he have done anything and to come up with such a childish ploy, WHAT A JOKE! HIM being called a Bastard not because of him being born of an affair but him being such a dickhead, is a great name for him for he is such a Dick Waffle. Really, why have you taken this route.
Thanks for Awesome Novel and Good Work. Hope you will keep up good work. Cultivation World with MC being very good and OP. Interesting Plot of how MC will rise, who will he conquer enjoying debauchery. Action also quite good, not bad and enjoyable debauchery. Details about it and character design, world background. Not much known about dangers and other things outside the empire and nobles in empire itself yet. But Novel is still young and no need to rush things. Everything is good.
This book is a absolute Gem! In the beginning i was nearly turned away due to the fact that other low quail toy books on this site seems to have similar covers to this one, but Iโm completely wrong. This book is such a wonderful gem and i would recommend that whoever is reading this to pick up this book - you wonโt regret it!
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I should say I am pretty impressed with the story and its progress. The author is really creative, to involve a lot of things and still manage to keep up a good story... its 5 stars from me. Fans who are fed up with the routine isekai's, give this a go....... Also, there is a lot of fan service, so people could enjoy reading it...twice or thrice or more than that (especially R-rated fans, I would say this fills your thirst XD)