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did ksitigarbha kill his whole family beforehand to not to become a cuckold....If he still had his wife.. he would be a man in the history to aim godhood being a cuckold....XDD

many of us could expect that....but you know how an overpowered MC could ruin the story... making it all about himself..him being like a god. ..which would ultimately decrease your anticipation in any of the coming action scenes..also it makes the background characters less valuable..which leads to a weak back story..and what would happen with all of this.. it becomes a cliche story....

i dont know which strength of kiba she's analysing to be that happy...XD

They met faster than i thought...I have no doubt that kiba would do anything for that innocent pure little girl..

Kiba will become the knight in shining armour for ashlyn....I can't wait for the day when she'll know the true side of her parents.. and also... Thanks for the long chap!!!

Its all about cultivation... The MC is a cultivation maniac..he does nothing but cultivating... but its soo good... This is really well written... great world development..good plot.. This is Indeed a masterpiece...yur in for some Surprises and twists... if you wanna go for some serious story with no cliche.. this is the best one... WARNING BEFORE HANDED... MC is not kind... He does anything for his cultivation..

i don't know why.. but Sophia and kiba could sure make a good couple...

I would wait for the day where olly gets a wife...

Probably No... cus morgan has always been dumb and he would just take it for a face mask or skin cream...

Thanks for the long chap!!!

If you are going to be a dicck about it.. Go on.. Saying that the author's writing is worse than a kid... Saying MC is being Dumb. Broken English.. collection of words... Calling this novel trash.. You fu×k×rs have not even read 50 chps and start reviewing this reading 2 to 10 chaps.. Every body started feeling like they are the great reviewers of all time..putting **** out there... For all of those who reviewed this as trash... have you ever written a novel... do you F****** know how challenging it is to write a novel...... Do you know how consistent you need to be to meet fans expectations every day.. Do you know how your reviews make author's feel like.... They are not Super rich and have time to write novels all day... Many of these authors struggle day to day with there own problems and still write chapters at night... If you wish to support the author or help him in his growth..tell him what he could improve..and what he is lacking...Don't put upfornt posters of your ****ty opinions Coming to me... This is a f****** good novel.. The grammar has never f******* bothered me... I loved the f******* comedy that was crazy lit everytime... Has good plot.. Good world building... Good progress.. Loved it through out... and hoping that author would continue it soon....

Well that concludes that the next chap is R18.. poor olly always helping...

it seems to be the case.... so... I guess the mining is postponed..

When is the twin's turn....?

This chap was lit!!! That was a big surprise