lumydee
this is one of the best books i've read in all the e-book apps. the story is really well thought out to the point of how many slaves come to baymard and how to divide them in various sectors for efficiency and effectiveness. love this book. I'll make sure to read it till the end no matter how long it takes. also hats off to the author, you did extremely well with this book. hope to see many other books by you in the future😇😇
IQ260, yet insanely stupid decisions, delusional methods and plot armor. Every girl he meets is beautiful. Especially the ones bordering on incestuous relationships. Author has no idea of non asian societies, or the subjects he writes about. The story is for those who lack basic knowledge and thus won't feel like pulling their hairs out whenever they read something absurdly stupid. Its a good bed time story for little kids under the age of 6. Any higher and they'll think you're messing with them with the stupid actions of a supposed *****.
Very, very confusing plotline, many spelling mistakes in the chapters forcing you to re-read something thinking that you were just being stupid. The chapters jump from being a medieval society to refining oil in about 10 chapters and within the next few chapters having diggers and producing industrial piping and whatnot. The kingdom building aspect of this novel is alright and has some well-thought foundation building for a modern city.
i tried boys, i did, i tried so hard to keep reading but i just could not keep going. I am the type of person that can keep readying if there is really bad grammar, and even if there are allot of plot holes. But i cant stand when Authors give there MC's an op background and nerf them just to make the conflicts they have more interesting. In this case i hate the fact that The author says that the MC has an IQ of 260. And before he reincarnated he was 26 years old. So he should be really smart right? he shouldn't act like a child right? he should think things through before acting right? nope! he does none of that. He gets upset when his mom treats him like a kid, when he is one in his new world. You would think he would realize that his mom does not know he has the mind of a 26 year old( or should have, since there's times he acts like a kid) He adopts a kid and his sister who is sick on the spot for no reason at all and makes them his lil bro and big sis. He treats every one like there his best friend and they have known each other for years. Even though there is people that want him dead, and he knows that because he was poisoned by those people, so you would think he would be cautions of new people right? But hes not. Chapters also drag on and on, The author did mention that this novel was going to be like 2000 chapters i don't know why. Now i could understand if he was actually slowly building up the technology. So of course it would make sense to have allot of chapters. But most of the chapters are basically filler, because theirs like 10 chapters of his knights training. Nothing to do with building his city up, just lots of chapters of them doing training drills. Like the author could not give us a quick synopsis of what there training was? I know there are people that like it, and if the MC wasn't so dumb, when he should be crazy smart. Even with all the chapters that feel like filler, even with the bad grammar. I would probobly really enjoy this, But the more i read i keep thinking "he's so F**king stupid, why is he so F**king stupid". And I am just not enjoying reading it. You know a novel does not have your attention when you start to skip chapters.
I was expecting something of similar quality to "Enlightened-Empire" or "Release that witch"... But it's totally different, it like a stupid Japanese novel. My favorites ( Ordered by best on top ): - BLACK IRON’S GLORY - Tales of the Reincarnated Lord - Enlightened Empire (hiato2020?) - Release that witch - The Red Lands - Rise of the Lord (hiato) - Out of Space ( it's not good enough, at least it doesn't have a stupid system ) None of them has any stupid system to ruin everything from the start :).
I like the concept behind this novel. However, the execution of this concept is horrible. The protagonist is rarely seen interacting with the system he is gifted with; however, somehow, he has many rewards that presumably came from the system. The main character makes dumb decisions and actively neglects his citizens because he has a 'quest' to complete. The technology spoken of is not well research, and therefore anyone with even a slight bit of knowledge in a certain field is going o cringe at some of the moments throughout this novel. If you want to read a wildly confusing novel where the main character tells people from medieval times to build a bulldozer, and then they do it with no questions asked, this is the novel for you.
bruh the guy is sooo dum i know he keeps prisoners but bruh the way he handles thing is not to my taste idk some people might like it. but its fustrating for me when you capture a rapist or a cannibalism and still locked them in instead of killing them j mean i could let some past but he locks most of them