yanglin
A work inspired from I Have A Mansion In The Post Apocalyptic World, and other world commuting + trading stories. Writing, updates and plot are OK. The characters design and the world background are lacking. -No one of the main and secondary characters has been properly introduced. We don’t even have an idea of what they look like. Even the places lack descriptions. -The story went straight to the uncle making him a shop keeper in an alternate world. No big reactions about that as well. It feels like it’s just an oddity for the protagonist. -And once more we have a stupid protagonist that doesn’t make proper preparations before leaving the security of his place and venturing into a dangerous world. Just a few days after the attack of a VERY DANGEROUS and TENACIOUS monster. No proper shooting training or self defense training, when there was a f*cking GANG WAR (thus possibly evil and greedy people) in his neighborhood (close to his shop) the previous day!
Ich kommentiere selten einen Roman aber in diesem Fall muss ich es tun Bin derzeit bei cap.46 und habe in einem rutsch durchgelesen. Der Aufbau gefällt mir es gib keine Verzögerungen in der Geschichte der Charakter bleibt stabil und ist weder pervers noch geistig zurückgeblieben. Meiner Meinung hat dieser Roman Potenzial und werde ihn weiterverfolgen.
This story is absolutely amazing! A ravishing gem amongst others. I love fantasy and this book is something I definitely would read over and over again without getting bored. Story is well-paced and the characters are lovable. Author's english is superb and this gives a smooth and enjoyable experience when reading. Also, the author's skill at giving descriptions is excellent. Greatly interested to see where the story goes. Definitely a must read! 💯 What are u still doing reading this review? Go read once. More updatess author. 👍 ✌️
The title of this book made me curious so I decided to read the blurb. When I read the blurb I knew I had to proceed to read the book. I read chapter one, which was really nice but I noticed that there were a few problems with tenses (I know you used grammerly but that app can be a bit of an ass sometimes) so I suggest you self edit if you can't get an editor to help with that. Above all, the book is nice, keep it up!