Very interesting with a unique take on the finding out of the Magical World, different from Harry’s.
There are some minute errors but they could be overlooked.
I have read some comments and I want to say that this is a novel that has *highest potential* into becoming one of the best or The Best Harry Potter Fanfic. So please don’t comment on what the author should or should not do because that would interfere with what the author has planned. Only write those kinds of comments when the author is asking for some recommendations.
Also Author, few comments doesn’t mean the entirety of the readers. Some readers just don’t like commenting.
I can’t make you not change your story because of us readers but I can remind you that this is your story and some novels haves turned out badly because they listened to what the readers proposed and they didn’t know what to do after and they just made some random, inconsistent s***. So keep on writing how you wanted it to turn out. So far, the story has been great.
Good Job.
