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breakerrxx
breakerrxxLv125yr
2019-07-27 20:26

I’m actually shook by the amount of good reviews this novel has because so far it’s utter trash 😂. The story is so cringe I can’t help but wonder if it was written by a 12 year old. Iron fist? Warrior Goblins? Pack? Go check out the first couple chapters to see what I mean lol. But if you actually end up liking this novel... I guess it doesn’t take much to entertain you. Not trying to be an ass (kind of am being one already) but this novel is so bad that at this point it’s just a joke that I can’t take seriously. It seems like it was written by some socially awkward shut in who fantasizes about being some dominant and over powered mc with crazy cheats (that don’t even fit in with the HP world) who’s a genius at whatever he does. OP characters are awesome.... when they’re done right. This isn’t a matter of poor writing but the thought process and level of thinking are... concerning.

Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter

ShadowRose13
4.4
34 Chs

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neymar
neymarLv15

Is the MC a dumbass with a hero complex? Can you please tell me I don't want waste my time if he is like that.

5yr
2
breakerrxx
breakerrxxLv12

It’s more like he’s equipped with all the necessary qualities to make him “cool”, but instead comes off as cringy imo. Tries too hard lol

5yr
2
Chaosreigns
ChaosreignsLv4

Lol I dropped when he said he doesn't care if its a man or a woman if their cute he'd smash. Big turn off for me especially considering hes 11

5yr
7
Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

Wtf... yeah, imma just miss a bullet here

Chaosreigns:Lol I dropped when he said he doesn't care if its a man or a woman if their cute he'd smash. Big turn off for me especially considering hes 11
4yr
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Iridescent_Bubble
Iridescent_BubbleLv12

Reveal spoiler

5yr

DaoOfDao
DaoOfDaoLv4

Very interesting with a unique take on the finding out of the Magical World, different from Harry’s. There are some minute errors but they could be overlooked. I have read some comments and I want to say that this is a novel that has *highest potential* into becoming one of the best or The Best Harry Potter Fanfic. So please don’t comment on what the author should or should not do because that would interfere with what the author has planned. Only write those kinds of comments when the author is asking for some recommendations. Also Author, few comments doesn’t mean the entirety of the readers. Some readers just don’t like commenting. I can’t make you not change your story because of us readers but I can remind you that this is your story and some novels haves turned out badly because they listened to what the readers proposed and they didn’t know what to do after and they just made some random, inconsistent s***. So keep on writing how you wanted it to turn out. So far, the story has been great. Good Job.

5yr
Totally_Confused
Totally_ConfusedLv3

I’m just saying, the mc is kinda a blockhead. Every word in this is just too straightforward. Idk, it’s just a little too hard to read for me.

5yr
MagnusBane
MagnusBaneLv13

Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far ! Interesting story so far !

5yr
Vistarion
VistarionLv11

Written by a young person. Pretentious hero, 0 skills acquired, all skills inherited. Heir: Potters, Peverels, Merlin and probably Trump and Clintons... A completely senseless storyline based on the legacy of OP.

5yr
Cromir
CromirLv6

Story has op mc with unrealistic ultra super plot armor. That does not fit in the original HP universe. If you like that kind of story this story might be for you. It is not my cup of tea.

5yr
TippierHalo
TippierHaloLv4

Honestly I do enjoy your story but it has been discontinued for a year so I also have no hope in it. Author I know your still fairly active on webnovel and I want to encourage you to continue. Anyway thanks for something that I enjoyed and could waste one hour of my day

3yr
blobfishKING
blobfishKINGLv2

Complete and utter trash, the main character can’t speak, talks about his friends like their his “pack” Wtf, this is just terrible. I have no idea why there r so many good reviews, somethings up

5yr
EbonyFrost
EbonyFrostLv14

This fan-fic is without a doubt a work of art. The MC is a genius in every sense of the word and pretty much represents a lot of our thoughts when looking back at events that occur in HP. The world-building is well thought out and masterful while the character design is marvelous. Would recommend to anyone, even those who aren't HP fans. Sincerely hope the author continues this great work with relatively stable updates.

5yr
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