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WolfBlade_5155
WolfBlade_5155Lv131yr
2024-03-25 09:45

Honestly my expectations were quite high, I was trying to like this but there just comes more and more useless information or oc characters. Then there is the vagueness what he is Bi/straight/gay and seeing as the bio says nothing i like a normal person believed hey this is straight bec if it was anything else i would state so in the bio like so many other authors does. more side quests than actual story telling(im not inlcuding the entire history for each or every small detail that is forced upon me)

Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter

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