Item: Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter
Rating: 2.8
Author: Totally_Confused

Totally_ConfusedLv35yr

2019-07-11 12:20

I’m just saying, the mc is kinda a blockhead. Every word in this is just too straightforward. Idk, it’s just a little too hard to read for me.

Alexander Prince - Half Blood Potter

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