Reviews of When back in Time

A five star! Writing quality, definitely good. Thumbs up for that. I love how you wrote in Filipino in between, I would do the same, but I'm too scared of ruining the story. In your case, it was perfecto. Updates, saw the days, seems regular to me. Story development, yep, it's getting weaved slowly and quite nicely if I might say so. The cliff hangers especially, make me want more. Welp, not exactly cliff hanger... But it does make you want to read more. (I'm so sorry, it's hard to explain since my English isn't good, not my first language) Character design, so far, I can tell the character depth... Though it's more of a personal skill here XD World background, The novel has just started. So I'll give this a five, in hopes for better description. All the best to you! ♥ ♥ ♥

The update is not that stable yet the author always does a mass release which is great. The story is weaving and developing nicely. Though the story is not more on dialogues but more on narrations, it is still good. I love how you put different languages on your story and showcasing your local mythological gods and goddesses. Good job!

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Fantastic way of drawing audience in, quote comical as well. Portrays a naive little teenage girl given a powerful item really well. Made me went through time, looking forward to seeing more in the future.

I like the whole premise! Nice writing style but I can't say it's flawless but I know the author will improve along the way. Hope you continue writing and won't drop this novel. it's good that it showcases the Philippines time which makes me happy and proud. Good luck on your journey!