Review Detail of NatsumeRikka in When back in Time
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A five star! Writing quality, definitely good. Thumbs up for that. I love how you wrote in Filipino in between, I would do the same, but I'm too scared of ruining the story. In your case, it was perfecto. Updates, saw the days, seems regular to me. Story development, yep, it's getting weaved slowly and quite nicely if I might say so. The cliff hangers especially, make me want more. Welp, not exactly cliff hanger... But it does make you want to read more. (I'm so sorry, it's hard to explain since my English isn't good, not my first language) Character design, so far, I can tell the character depth... Though it's more of a personal skill here XD World background, The novel has just started. So I'll give this a five, in hopes for better description. All the best to you! ♥ ♥ ♥
When back in Time
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Thank you for your review. I personally think, if you want to use another language in between your story (aside from English), you should do it. Even if the first start is kinda messy, you should try it. Even if you fail once, why not try it twice. There is nothing wrong if you mess up once or twice, or maybe many times. At least you try. Moreover, in every mistake you make, in the end, you'll finally learn your lesson. Sooner you will learn how to do it properly (just like me, though I'm having a hard time writing Filipino lines here since this was not my first language) (I'm a Bisaya anyway 😊, Bisaya is my mother tongue) So anyway, I think you should try it, challenge yourself, go beyond your limits so you can grow more and be proficient in writing. 😊😊😊
As for the first two lines. Well, I'm a Bisaya. When I say 'my mother tongue' it does not mean my mom's tongue. It actually means "my first language". Hhahahah. Just to clarify things here.... As for the last two lines. If I assume you forget to put a quotation mark on the third sentence, then that meant that you were referring to me (and not to your self). [Sorry, I get confused with the shift of persona there] So..... Anyway, so yeah, I'm rusty in using Filipino even though it's our national language (how ironic right?). In our city, we don't occasionally use Filipino, even in our academic course (because our courses deal more with English language).
HeliasDream:Bisaya? Your mom’s most likely from Visayas or Mindanao. I can barely speak Tagalog (and that’s their national tongue 😂😩😅)
*Slaps myself* I forgot mother tongue is another word for "native tongue." And I'm really sad to hear that you guys are made to mostly made to read and write in English (at least according to my dad haha). I think that's the reason why most people don't know how to write letters in Tagalog. (I once asked my dad if he had any essays written in Tagalog, apparently he was made to write all his essays in English T^T).