Flat_Moon
this is the first story on this site i read where the author that chose to use an op mc actually understood how to use that type of character setting. The focus of this story isn't battling monster and gods or slapping the faces of arrogant young master its actually a slice of life novel with an op mc. it makes it relaxed and enjoyable to read. no quest for strength for strengths sake. he gets power to take care of his daughter and thats it. while fights happen they aren't what makes this novel a novel its merely a subgenre. all in all a nice enoyable story to read. although it is apparently a polygamious story as his daughter wishes for a lot of mommies. i will not classify it as harem unless there are more then 5 wives(for me that is others might the start of a harem at a higher number of wives).
3 star. MC: he's from our earth when he and his daughter (adopted) relocate to MCU/marvel by god. God made his charm and coolness high so that it automatically activate everytime (for example if you have watch Overlord momonga, automatically cancel the feelings when he feel excited or happy. Perk of being an undead). He also strong from the start, smart, doting parents to his daughter. By the way author make alter ego name suck: white stud his hero name. World building: MCU and marvel series, comics timeline. Everytime you read you guess what timeline is that and if it fits because author make some of marvel series/comic event smash on some MCU timeline. So far I read fantastic 4, hulk, and there's also young peter parker with ned. So the timeline and event here was jumble but the MCU timeline was consistent. Harem: MC has 3 woman so far going 4. The romance in this fic is very little no non existent even he has 3 woman already. When reading you suddenly realize that he sleep with a woman because author make few to none indication or build up to romance. Fight scene: So far good. Update per chapter: sometimes author takes time to update, sometimes 3 - 4 days per chapter. So far interesting but not good and bad, I love OP , strong from the start self insert MC and so far my interest in this fic didn't lessen. Well this review is heads up on what you read in this fic so goodluck.
Like the concept but when I first read this fic I was expecting like "Godly stay home dad" or something like that with harem and he's in marvel universe. The fic is good and not perfect and many flaws. I hope also there's an r18 scene. And add some character list and harem list until latest chapter. Or some glossary.
Hi there, are review reader this the author giving an honest review no shameless here. First of the conceptual foundation of the story is the relationship between father and daughter everything is a side story. Hence the need for him to be on a broken level of Op. I love Op character but I think a lot of the time people miss the mark. I think to make a good story where Mc is broken Op you need to focus on the normal interaction of life instead of fights. If you've seen one punch man you know what I mean. My story is very basic if broken down. Nothing really new as I've seen a fanfiction where Tony Stark has a kid. Which by the way not that great. Inspired by multiple father novels that have yet to translated. This admittedly very slow paced, some mistakes in grammar every now and then but I'm getting better. My schedules pretty bad compared to others on here with 3 times a week. World background is easy considering its a fanfiction. With that said just give it a try, you might like it who knows
Here is my review of this novel called "Harem in Marvel Universe". Given the title "Marvel's Strongest Father" you would think the plot would revolve around him and his daughter. Right? No! A pitiful amount of words are set aside for the interactions between father and daughter. Most of the time the chapters are about the MC's doing what he wants claiming it to be "for my family". MC already has 3 women in 50 chapters and counting! Author will probably put almost every woman in Marvel universe as a harem member. Plot: Spends too much time interfering with marvel movie plots. Author will probably loose things to write about quite quickly if this continues. MC: Almost zero backstory for our MC. Very little is know about the main character as well as his daughter prior to meeting god. It's as if it doesn't matter why he adopted his daughter in the first place.
I quite like the Marvel universe, but I am not very knowledgeable about the original stories of many of the characters in this universe. I like to read some Marvel fans and I would say that this is one of the best I have read, the only bad thing is the frequency with which the author publishes the chapters.