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Flat_Moon

Flat_Moon

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Reader? Yes. Writer? yes. A great one? Not so much.

2017-09-21 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Commented

    I don't know why but Mystique would be interesting I haven't read any fanfics that put her in the harem and maybe instead of Black Widow maybe Maria Hill just for the fun of it

    Ch 10 Harem? If yes which girls
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Vansmoke

    4 or 5 still uncertain but definitely no more.

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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Sad_Tweety

    Just writers block but I don't know what this 3rd book is. I currently only one other novel "A Father In Marvel" still trying to be updated what's the other one

    Ch 69 Contract Killers
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Lasagnaaa

    It was the inspiration for it

    He is super-power user with the ability to produce and shoot sharp bones from his body. This ability comes with a high healing factor to patch up the holes made by producing bones.
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Posted

    Everything is great apart from the Mc. The Mc has a severe fanboy problem. Its so bad that he willing tells them everything about the Omnitrix and I don't think you need to be a genius to know that is not something you share. I lost all hope when he shared that he can remove the Omnitrix. He basically announced "you just have to force me and you too can be the holder of the Omnitrix" Seriously he trusts spy agency with his knowledge and that's a mistake in itself. My rating is high because the only problem is the Mc's fanboy personality negates common sense.

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    Omnitrix in Marvel
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Posted

    This way better than I expected. The story as I understand is not about simply being a Hero but Chris (Mc) coming to terms with being outcasted again even after being reincarnated. The explanation for his ability's are detailed but not enough to feel like an info dump. I really love this novel keep it up

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    The Blank Omnitrix
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Tezmaster

    Its a made up fruit drink brand shortly mentioned in the chapter where Mary got him an interview, gruited ad and a Marathon run.

    "Let's put the game to the side today and film your ad for Gruited" Said Mary
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Commented

    I've somewhat been scammed yet I'm not upset

    Ch 28 Big Announcement !
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Flat_Moon

    the third novel was my first novel which had too many problems to count which even the fans of it agreed.

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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to EnderPL

    Ummm, you good bro. I don't know what you on about when it comes to attention-seeking. As I've stated that the first one had things that I as the author didn't like. It's a rewrite, not a re-upload. I've changed multiple things to make it so that things can progress faster as my writing is generally slow-paced. Also, I didn't drop four novels I dropped three and two of them was basically the same with the only difference being one harem and the other wasn't. I realised that I couldn't keep up with uploading both so I dropped the none harem one before continuing the harem version for at least 30 chapters before losing interest in the story. The fourth novel which I presume you're talking about the first version of Part-Time Star, Full Time Dad was blacklisted. I did ask a staff member but he never got back to me and after wait 3 days nothing changed even after removing the things that got me blacklisted so the only thing I can do is re-upload Part-time Star Full Dad. Please don't go around throwing 1-star reviews with next to no reason as to why the story deserves it. The review section is for the novel not the past novels under the author's name. Especially since the author could have improved since his/her last novel. Thank you for your incite though

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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    thanks, I changed it and the harem is still 4-5 max.

    Ch 64 Partners
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to tommy_king

    it more on the characters addressing it this time

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Tezmaster

    actually their wraps are amazing.

    Ch 62 The Very First
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to Tezmaster

    True but the only thing I like from McDonald's is just a regular cheeseburger and chips.

    Ch 62 The Very First
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to SHAIPES

    its a bug from what I hear numerous authors are suffering the same ordeal as me.

    Ch 59 Back To Back
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to SHAIPES

    yes

    Ch 59 Back To Back
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Commented

    For those wondering why you can't vote well I've heard its a bug as it was doing the same thing earlier, then at around 10:50, it started working again and now its back no vote bs

    Ch 59 Back To Back
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Commented

    I couldn't fit it into the author note so just so you know for daily updates. The chapter will be shorter. As of right now, a chapter is around 1,800 to 2,500. This will cut down to most likely 1,000 to 1,500 word. This does mean that the chances of being hit by cliffhanger are extremely higher and pacing might be even slower. sorry for the long text here's a group of monkeys tap dancing

    Ch 59 Back To Back
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Commented

    love it

    Ch 13 Getting to Phase 1
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  • Flat_Moon
    Flat_Moon3yr
    Replied to DarkVegeto

    it's pretty rare I think. There's Daddy Iron Man which is just a copy and paste of the Iron man script with a system. There's One Punch Family which is the idea of Saitama having a monster wife and monster kid. I've read two Naruto as Dad novels where he's transmigrated to DC Universe with Hinata and the other was DXD but his new wife gives Birth Asia and dies shortly after it.There are probably others but I can't think of them.

    Ch 58 The Basics
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