Flat_Moon
Reader? Yes. Writer? yes. A great one? Not so much.
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Everything is great apart from the Mc. The Mc has a severe fanboy problem. Its so bad that he willing tells them everything about the Omnitrix and I don't think you need to be a genius to know that is not something you share. I lost all hope when he shared that he can remove the Omnitrix. He basically announced "you just have to force me and you too can be the holder of the Omnitrix" Seriously he trusts spy agency with his knowledge and that's a mistake in itself. My rating is high because the only problem is the Mc's fanboy personality negates common sense.
This way better than I expected. The story as I understand is not about simply being a Hero but Chris (Mc) coming to terms with being outcasted again even after being reincarnated. The explanation for his ability's are detailed but not enough to feel like an info dump. I really love this novel keep it up
Its a made up fruit drink brand shortly mentioned in the chapter where Mary got him an interview, gruited ad and a Marathon run.
Ummm, you good bro. I don't know what you on about when it comes to attention-seeking. As I've stated that the first one had things that I as the author didn't like. It's a rewrite, not a re-upload. I've changed multiple things to make it so that things can progress faster as my writing is generally slow-paced. Also, I didn't drop four novels I dropped three and two of them was basically the same with the only difference being one harem and the other wasn't. I realised that I couldn't keep up with uploading both so I dropped the none harem one before continuing the harem version for at least 30 chapters before losing interest in the story. The fourth novel which I presume you're talking about the first version of Part-Time Star, Full Time Dad was blacklisted. I did ask a staff member but he never got back to me and after wait 3 days nothing changed even after removing the things that got me blacklisted so the only thing I can do is re-upload Part-time Star Full Dad. Please don't go around throwing 1-star reviews with next to no reason as to why the story deserves it. The review section is for the novel not the past novels under the author's name. Especially since the author could have improved since his/her last novel. Thank you for your incite though
it more on the characters addressing it this time
I couldn't fit it into the author note so just so you know for daily updates. The chapter will be shorter. As of right now, a chapter is around 1,800 to 2,500. This will cut down to most likely 1,000 to 1,500 word. This does mean that the chances of being hit by cliffhanger are extremely higher and pacing might be even slower. sorry for the long text here's a group of monkeys tap dancing
it's pretty rare I think. There's Daddy Iron Man which is just a copy and paste of the Iron man script with a system. There's One Punch Family which is the idea of Saitama having a monster wife and monster kid. I've read two Naruto as Dad novels where he's transmigrated to DC Universe with Hinata and the other was DXD but his new wife gives Birth Asia and dies shortly after it.There are probably others but I can't think of them.