Review Detail of Flat_Moon in DROPPED: Marvels Strongest Father

Hi there, are review reader this the author giving an honest review no shameless here. First of the conceptual foundation of the story is the relationship between father and daughter everything is a side story. Hence the need for him to be on a broken level of Op. I love Op character but I think a lot of the time people miss the mark. I think to make a good story where Mc is broken Op you need to focus on the normal interaction of life instead of fights. If you've seen one punch man you know what I mean. My story is very basic if broken down. Nothing really new as I've seen a fanfiction where Tony Stark has a kid. Which by the way not that great. Inspired by multiple father novels that have yet to translated. This admittedly very slow paced, some mistakes in grammar every now and then but I'm getting better. My schedules pretty bad compared to others on here with 3 times a week. World background is easy considering its a fanfiction. With that said just give it a try, you might like it who knows