Leixein
I love this fanfic. For those of you guys that are hesitating because it has NTR in the description, don't. Like the author said the girls don't f*** the other guys, so it's not that bad. Think of this fanfic as an alternate reality/alternate universe. In the original they lived happily ever after, and in this one they just didn't. If you don't want to hate the original girls, then you should probably not read it because you will. The MC will rebuild his Harem with different women from different worlds. As he trains to get stronger and stronger. The only thing I don't like about the novel. Is when he goes to different worlds, it just takes too got dam long. I understand that the author is trying to build relationships with the future harem members. And like the author said, hes trying not to make it look like the MC is a Pokemon Master. That's just throwing poke balls at the women in capturing them. It's just that he's in a different world chapter after chapter after chapter. Overtime it just doesn't feel like a DxD fanfic anymore. As soon as he starts traveling to different worlds, he goes to one world after another and never really goes back. The author was doing a good job at throwing in dialogue of the DxD world. Like updating us on what was going on with in the DxD world with the MC's disappearance. But so far it seems like he's just hasn't done it since the past couple chapters, and it has sort of lost the DxD fanfic Vibe for me. For me personally I would love less erotic chapters like describing how they're having *** for a whole two chapters. And have less chapters of each World he's traveling to. And throw in more information on whats going on in the DxD world. Another thing is that I don't like that the other DxD characters know about what happened and they hate what the girls did to the MC. But they don't want to punish the girls because they don't want them to suffer, punish them a little bit. Like make the angle a fallen angle. That would have been great. But not much punishment has happened, which is BS in my book. But other than that I love it.
Zero-effort story. Complete rubbish writing. No attempt at even properly formatting or making it readable after 95+ chapters of nonsense. Characters are incredibly unrealistic and their behavior makes no sense for anyone who's made the journey out of their parents' doorway. Story is only at the top of Fanfics list because of spam reviews and stones. A perfect example of how garbage can be elevated and presented as something worth caring about in a broken system like Webnovel's. Complete waste of time for everyone involved.
I canโt read this..there are so many problems. Not only is the story extremely cringy, the characters talk as if they are all giving speeches, the paragraphs arenโt spaced properly, random sh*t that donโt make any sense keep on happening and I only read up to the second chapter so I can only imagine what will happen in future chapters. The grammar is excusable since the author already stated that English isnโt his first language. The story doesnโt make any sense, even for a fanfic. It just feels overwhelmingly forced overall.
It is among the most fulfilling fan fiction of Highschool DxD you can read at net. Pro: Slightly realistic Isse and his girls (Here old lovers) as a person who lives for 10,000 years will have multiple partners whether they are male or female. Isse is dethroned from his status as Alpha in his pack from the start. But the way author portrayed them as foolish girls is also refreshing. My only request is to make them his maids rather than killing/tormenting them for many years till that they understand his past sacrifices and respect his feeling as in original story he accepts them as his family, so revenge on family for such matter will not be appropriate. (While looking him going cheesy with his new harem, of course. Fast revenge is not always appropriate, make it slow poison.๐๐) Thanks author for writing this story at amazing speed. For Grammar Nazis: Stay Off, Nigga. This is our turf.
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Well this fanfic had promising start. But as the novel progresses it becomes worse and worse. This is just another super wish fulfillment type of novel. Well what do i even expect from fanfics. First of all, power system of this fanfic is absolute garbage. Sometimes it seems author himself doesnโt even know what he is writing. It may be due to world travelling part but even then it is just so stupid. I dropped this fanfic after author said Azure Dragon God from ATG is comparable to whatever dragon from Highschool DxD. Worst thing is how author make mc super godly strong. Okay that is not problem? Well author just describes 70% of the chapter just how handsome and super strong he is. Believe me, I am not exaggerating 70% of this novel is just glorifying MC and describing how nothing can harm him. You wanna see some action? Nope author will just describe how godly MC is. Last of all, characters in this fanfic are all superficial. I dont have much to say on this. Also author just copies sentences and paragraphs from original sources. There is nothing original in his writing. All in all this is one of the worst fanfics on the platform. I dont even know how people still read this.
terrible story, no idea how this garbage is so popular, could hardly read to chapter 100 chapters while cringing so badly. world background - DXD world so nothing new updates used to be regular so I will give him that. Character design - nothing new story development - brain damage level terrible. writing quality above average
THIS IS MY SECOND FAVORED ORIGINAL WEB NOVEL BESIDES EPIC(ENDLESS PATH: INFINITE COSMOS) SUCH A HUGE SHAME THERE ISN'T ENOUGH CHAPTER UPDATES DAILY LATELY BEEN LIKE A WEEK PER CHAPTER DO ME A HUGE FAVOR AUTHOR LEIXEIN PLEASE MESSAGE ME HOW MANY NEW CHAPTERS YOU'LL POST A WEEK/WEEKS/MONTHS DON'T WORRY I KNOW FROM YOUR COMMENTS YOU'LL POST NEW ONES AS SOON AS THERE DONE I JUST DON'T LIKE TO CONSTANTLY REFRESH BROWSER EVERY 12-24 HOURS TO SEE IF A NEW CHAPTER PLEASE YOUR HUGE FAN MICHAEL.