Review Detail of ElectricDragonKing in The Wish of the Dragon

Writing quality: rip tenses. Some verbs are not conjugated properly. Choice of words seems stiff at times. However, the novel is more than readable Stability of updating: I have no complaints on this. The author updates frequently and seems to have the will to complete his/her novel. Story development: I like how the story is panning out in the beginning. He was forced to remove his pieces because the betrayal he experienced changed something on it and on the process of fixing this, he met new people that will help him get in terms of the things done to him. However on the latest chapters, IMO the author shouldn’t just willy nilly add characters just to be a harem member for the main character. Especially in the latest one(c27ish), the mc had an amnesia for using his power in order to survive and the author added another women instantly. I wouldn’t mind a large harem(im not into them but you do you author) but introduce them gradually and with proper background info. Adding to this, I really don’t like NTR even if the soft kind(there are NO sexual relations between old harem and new asshole boyfriends(c27)) but that’s the premise and that won’t change. However, the mc should still be a bit paranoid, even though he can “trust” the new harem now, so it will be realistic. You don’t just get over multiple cheating for a few months. Character design: This is only for the new ones. As I said before, don’t just add characters for his harem. It isn’t that fun to read people meeting and falling in love in 1 chapter. I don’t feel “involved” in their romance iykwim. Like the twin dragons, their meeting is really arbitrary and I feel like they’re not developed as characters because they don’t have a decent background. World background: I mean this novel is inspired by HSDxD so I don’t think it’s relevant to include this rating. Conclusion: I’m enjoying your novel author, however there are some issues that would make this even better if fixed IMO. I hope you take some of these ideas to heart for the improvement of your novel and thank you for writing this.