I came back here just to comment this picture on this paragraph. Farewell

Bro became urban godly doctor. All he left to do is bring out some needles and perform acupuncture.

Wrote a review. (many days ago) 👍

Raw? Oh wow I thought you just directly write it in english and let the editors fix some writing errors. Which language do you usually write it in originally?

Okay i’ll try to give unbiased feedback(not like I’ve been following this book for the last 5-6 years). I was thinking of giving a review after 100 chapters but I did not even realize 150+ chapters have already been released. This is a well written novel with a lot of unique concept that pulls you in the more you read. First of all, world background is amazing. You can feel the grandness of the world by reading through the chapters. It keeps reminding there are vast world outside of where MC lives. Looking forward to how MC will explore that. Character designs are top notch. Especially, Isis, just love her. Character interactions just feels much more realistic compared to a lot of novels on this platform which have conversations that just feels flat you know. This novel is basically a mix of different mythologies and religions. Well the whole plot is based around that. It mainly consists of Egyptian mythology and cultivation. Writing quality is pretty good with almost close to none grammatical and spelling errors. Since it is like 2nd or 3rd iteration of this book many small details have been ironed out and fixed compared to previous versions. Of course, I can’t just keep writing about good things, there are some drawbacks. The biggest would be that, the whole cultivation system is too…. “messy”. It has too many termonologies that it just confuses the hell out of me. Especially all these titles regarding cultivation realms, concepts and souls. I’ve been a avid high fantasy reader for the past 6 years. Even then I only have general gist of the power system. Not really understanding how characters are fighting. Well it might be just because of my ADHD. Since I am more accustomed to more simpler terms that are used in chinese cultivation novels 🤷. And finally, I will just say: Keep up the good work author. I know the novel has not been amassing huge audience but the key to become popular is “consistency”. I know some original webnovels in here that were really struggling to get into top 200 that had like 250 chapters. Yet, the authors of those novels kept going until they got into top 10 and 5 comfortably. So, I really hope you finish this series whether it be 2 or 10 years later, it does not matter. As long I read/see the conclusion of this adventure. Good luck 🫡

Sensei? That’s odd way to address your teacher considering the theme of this world. Maybe there is also some kind of japanese influence in this world aside from Egypt and China.

100th chapter 👏

Ah, classic three goods in one sentence. I bet if he snorts some juniors would instantly become blood mist.

It seems you forgot. First 3 or 4 levels of Dao Technique did not require him to transcend the tribulation. If this is his 5th tribulation transcendence. Then it should indeed be 9th level of his technique that he is breaking through.

Well it is much more detailed than previous version. The motivation of character and why they did certain things in aforementioned version is better explained in this iteration. Also it feels like some of the plots are vastly different Though overall direction of the novel remains the same as the previous. Which is the reason i really liked this novel in the first place. All in all, this is much better. I am really liking it. I really hope you keep pumping out chapters like this. Atleast until the plot line where last version ended. Remember even though me and other readers(probably) do not comment on every chapter just know I am still supporting this book. Keep up the good work author. 👍👏

Now that i think about it, this watching thing is really like ORV.

Thanks for the chapter author 🔥

Fair enough 👍

Oh wow this is vastly different from the old version huh. MC did not even have this system thing-y. A surprise, to be sure, but a welcome one. I just hope this carries on to the overall plot of the novel. Meaning, some of the “unsightly” things does not happen to his mother and family. Welp, that is just me ranting my own idealistic expectations. You do your own thing author. Whatever direction you choose, I will still support it. Looking forward to seeing what this novel will bring. Thanks for the mass release! 🙏

Considering how females were treated on this planet in the previous iteration of this book. Being born as a female definitely does not sound fun 💀

digesting^

Sigh, it seems my persistence of not removing this book from my library is finally paying off. I remember first time finding this novel on royalroad. It has been many year since then. Also, I really hope you improved the plot. Since, previously I was quite unappealed at the overall direction of it. Welp, I am really excited for the comeback of this book. Good luck!

This is me right now fr fr 💀

Fk. This fanfic is gradually becoming the best one from the ones i am currently reading on this platform. Great job author!