Comments of chapter undefined of The Craftsman
The Craftsman
WickedQueen2
Chapter comments10
The escalation was too fast, it was smithing but a few seconds later it becomes an edgy bloody battle!
I agree the author escalated it far too quickly, it's unfortunate, I feel this had a lot of potential to show off the crafting part of the story. Not gonna lie I definitely did escalate too quick, I hope as you read further it gets better, if not please berate my writing and offer feedback I really appreciate it thanks for reading!!!
details and comparisons with other students, what the other students made... if there are any people like classmates involved with the MC, one can also expound on how he is with what happened, he basically got betrayed and got himself killed because of his attitude.... I think that should make an impact on who he is trying to be in the new life he has. just comments and my opinion. I do respect on how you write, maybe it is a new approach where the MC is really the only focus of the story.... ^^V thanks for the chapter!
